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"Comments on Grix's story"

He asked the comments to be put in a new topic, Next time listen Rasta :-)

Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.

I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.

So, what do you think of it so far?

(Rubbish.)

Cool. :0D

Chapter 7 rocked. Mexcellent it was.

Enjoying it, and becoming more and more immersed in the story, which I was finding it hard to do. That is not a reflection on your ability Grix, just me - I prefer to read all in one go rather than installments.

Loving it now though - even I winced at the end then.

Nah, couldn't kill you Venom... you're too far away. Thanks for the remarks though. ;0)

Two days. Two friggin' days after I vow to check all my spelling before posting, I go and mess up again.

Kill me.

Thats it! I can never, ever spell that.

Mouldy Cheese wrote:
> The 'evil' personality thing is a bit cleashed (sp?), but then you are
> doing everything else differently. Very strange, but very good to
> read. Keep it up, or else.

You mean clichéd?

In a way, I suppose. Grix has used that theme for a while, but I don't think that this story is going to be at all predictable in that respect.

Fear the Anit-Grix!

Ant wrote:
>
> I'm sure SR won't nick your ideas, but I wouldn't trust many people on
> here...

:D

The 'evil' personality thing is a bit cleashed (sp?), but then you are doing everything else differently. Very strange, but very good to read. Keep it up, or else.

Chapter 4 confused me... but I'm guessing it will be explained later on.

In a way... I'm in the story :P

I bet that sheep is a handsome chap.