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"Comments on Grix's story"

He asked the comments to be put in a new topic, Next time listen Rasta :-)

Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.

I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.

Excellent.

Worked a HELL of a lot of things out in my mind last night... everythings falling together pretty well, pretty fantastically actually.

Really enjoying writing this, more than anything I've wrote before.

Hadn't spotted this before today, up to date now though. I'm enjoying it.

Mexcellent again. :0D

Excellent... glad you're all enjoying it. :0)

Dr Duck wrote:
> Just started reading it.

By which i mean i'd not read any before now. I just read everything that's currently there. I don't know whether i'd made that clear.

Just started reading it. Been very busy lately.

Fantastic stuff. Absolutely fantastic. I don't think i've ever read so much in one sitting on these forums before, but it holds you so well.

It's excellent. Keep writing.

Just read the whole lot during this afternoon, very very good.

I think I can see where it's going, which probably means I'm completely wrong. :-D

Don't worry about the western stuff... that's the last you'll hear from that in a LONG time anyway. :0)

And can you read the SECOND Chapter Nine please? The first one messed up... stupid NTL.

I don't like the cuts to the Western thing... mainly because I can't stand Western stuff... last chapter is starting to distance itself from story so far... maybe as it is less informal... with Leon swearing or something.

I do have a migrane so just ignore... heh must be good if I'm still reading it.