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He asked the comments to be put in a new topic, Next time listen Rasta :-)
Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.
I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.
Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.
I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.
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So the story continues.
Another flashback I see...
Is everyone else still keeping up with it?
Another flashback I see...
Is everyone else still keeping up with it?
Yahoo! It's tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
Wehey! :-)
I'm sorry, I really am. I'm just so busy with work at the moment, and when I'm off I've got craploads to do about moving to Essex.
"Who fell out of the Speedboat?"
Did they fall, or were they pushed?
"Where did Leon go?"
Not far.
"Is Davis going to come to a really sticky end?"
Maybe.
Chapter 34 will be available for reading tomorrow. When I write it.
"Who fell out of the Speedboat?"
Did they fall, or were they pushed?
"Where did Leon go?"
Not far.
"Is Davis going to come to a really sticky end?"
Maybe.
Chapter 34 will be available for reading tomorrow. When I write it.
I read all 33 chapters.
Grix and Seiyo have been stuck in that field of Dragons and Monkeys for well over a week!
Who fell out of the Speedboat?
Where did Leon go?
Is Davis going to come to a really sticky end?
Grix, am I ever going to see Chapter 34? :-)
Grix and Seiyo have been stuck in that field of Dragons and Monkeys for well over a week!
Who fell out of the Speedboat?
Where did Leon go?
Is Davis going to come to a really sticky end?
Grix, am I ever going to see Chapter 34? :-)
I finally got round to reading it all today. What can say its fantastic so far. The last chapter was certainly unexpected, but then most of it is. You right in a similar way to Neil Gaiman and Diana Wynne Jones. Thats good because they are my favourite authurs.
The last couple of chapters did seem like a bit of an odd change in tempo....
Still good though.
Still good though.
Heh.
Cool.
Cool.
*grins*
Oh yes.
Oh yes.
WHat an odd chapter...!
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