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He asked the comments to be put in a new topic, Next time listen Rasta :-)
Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.
I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.
Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.
I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.
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Cool, it'll be here for ages. Hopefully you'll publish it when you've finished, and that will be excellent. What you aiming for, a chapter a day?
Very, very long. :0) Novel size.
And kinda a dual story... going to spilt a few more ways though.
And kinda a dual story... going to spilt a few more ways though.
Cool, it's going to be a dual story, maybe. Looking good so far, Grixy boy. D'you know how long you intend it to be?
Grix Thraves wrote:
> Erm. Ta. :0D
:-D
> Erm. Ta. :0D
:-D
Erm. Ta. :0D
Excellent excellent excellent. All three parts are excellent. And I want more dammit, WRITE MORE. :-)
Bizzare.
Yes, excellent so far. I reached the end of the second part, and found myself wanting to read more. Good luck with it.
Oh yes, the story :-) Well, I'm enjoying it, though I'm not sure what it's about yet. Keep going though, I want to find out.
Ah, that would be my fault. Sorry about that Grix.
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