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He asked the comments to be put in a new topic, Next time listen Rasta :-)
Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.
I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.
Anyway here you can post your comments on his story and not ruin his other post with the story in it.
I thought the first bit was good, keep it up and don't let it become one of those stories that just never seems to get finished, I'll be looking out for more of it.
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Ooh, monkey_man's comment goes... erm... not really that bothered, but thanks anyway.
Does that mean that there's staff reading too?
Does that mean that there's staff reading too?
Meka Dragon wrote:
"because it's sad to see what happened to the poor thing."
That's all I wanted really. I'm not after controversy, or anything stupid like that... just wanted you to see what had happened, a contrast to the flashbacks.
"because it's sad to see what happened to the poor thing."
That's all I wanted really. I'm not after controversy, or anything stupid like that... just wanted you to see what had happened, a contrast to the flashbacks.
The GingerLord wrote:
"I realise that this story is more than slightly autobiographical, so...."
NO. :0D
Renna is a very important character... not saying any more.
"I realise that this story is more than slightly autobiographical, so...."
NO. :0D
Renna is a very important character... not saying any more.
Grix Thraves wrote:
> *expecting comments on chapter twelve...*
It get's a frown.
Not because it's not well written or owt, just because it's sad to see what happened to the poor thing.
> *expecting comments on chapter twelve...*
It get's a frown.
Not because it's not well written or owt, just because it's sad to see what happened to the poor thing.
Heh, no problem... :0)
I'm not going to comment much on the story... don't want to give stuff away.
I'm not going to comment much on the story... don't want to give stuff away.
Yeah, that was what my post was about.
I have a question actually. But its too sick to think about. Okay, here goes:
I realise that this story is more than slightly autobiographical, so....
Nope, can't finish the question. Too sick and twisted. Need to go and have a shower. Must. Get. Clean.
I have a question actually. But its too sick to think about. Okay, here goes:
I realise that this story is more than slightly autobiographical, so....
Nope, can't finish the question. Too sick and twisted. Need to go and have a shower. Must. Get. Clean.
I haven't read any the past few days, studying for last exam tomorrow and don't want to push out stuff I know thinking about the story so I'll catch up tomorrow after my exam. I don't usually like stories, book and all that Jazz but this one has me wanting more. Give me a chance to catch up tomorrow. :-)
*expecting comments on chapter twelve...*
Blimey Grix, where the hell did that come from! To use an Americanism "way out of left field" is about as good as any. Anyways, keep it coming!
Great stuff Grix, really got me hooked!
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