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Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
I've listened to you yet never heard you,
I've felt you yet never touched you,
I sometimes wonder do I even know you?
I'll always wonder,
I'll never know.
Anyway, check out my The Thing spoof, see if you're in it
> Monkey_With_Attitude wrote:
correct. but not any of
> these words (bar mine).
Go prove...:-)
I will be writing more as it comes but right now I just got 3 rocking albums which really don't set me in the mood. The song thats on now is actually...
Keep them coming, Sibs, RBS, Mr.Happy you have talent.
Words are powerful...
> Those were really interesting words RBS...
I liked the use of cocoon, and
> showing the fear of outside.
Cheers.
PS, an agrophobic is one of those people who
> fears wide open spaces right?
Yup.
I liked the use of cocoon, and showing the fear of outside.
PS, an agrophobic is one of those people who fears wide open spaces right?
In my cocoon,
Scared to come out,
Almost agraphobic,
For they will be there,
But my image projected,
Is one of bravery?
One of courage?
One of honour?
It's a first impression,
But you only get to make one,
And as I lie here,
Day in, Day out,
Thoughts flash across the wasteland of my mind,
Like a Lightning bolt in a thunderstorm,
Suddenly I'm illuminated,
The fear is gone,
For now at least
I feel free,
That freedom I've yearned for,
Ever since ever,
I've wanted to break free,
Tomorrow
I've conquered my fear,
Tomorrow will be the first day,
The first day of the rest of my life,
It's tomorrow today,
I'm free,
But I'm scared,
Can I go outside?
Will they still be there?
I thought I had it beat,
That fear,
That worry,
That anxiety,
But I don't
I'm still scared to go outside,
I'm still worried for my life,
I'm still anxious about judgement
So back into my cocoon I crawl,
To hide for another day
I do have rough ideas of tunes for most songs though. I must admit, that last one had the tune a little plundered from a song I heard by a band called 'AKO'. They are a melodic Hardcore band, and I thought the song was really good, and I kind of imagined the beginning of this song going along with that tune.
Anyway, cheers Mr. Happy, and keep this topic going if you have anything to write.
:-)
Is young innocence forever
> destined,
To become hardened cynicism?
Wow, that touched a nerve. It pretty much sums me up.
That was really good, is it set to music yet?
and congrats for a thoroughly desrved GAD :-)