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"Your Words"

Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?

Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.

Here is the thread for your thoughts.


I look forward to reading them,
MWA

Any comments...???


Anyway, here are some words... not really lyrics this time, I just started writing really...

Anyway, the title of this piece is 'Not Coming Home'



The faces are sombre as they walk in the door,
They slowly crack, reveal the ugliness there,
And you can hear the hearts crack,
Tear to pieces at the pain.

Not coming home.
Never walk through that door.
Sit in that chair.
Laugh at their favourite film with you.

And you dream of them,
Alive and well again,
your reality was just a dream,
for now this dream is real.

But you wake up in tears,
Still half believing,
But in the bottom of your broken heart,
You know.

Not coming home.
Your final words echo.
The image flickers.
Seems to fade.

Not coming home.
The watch on the side.
Ticks down the time.
Reminds you of your own mortality.

But most of all,
Of the wasted time,
Not spent with them,
Because from now on,

Not Coming Home.

anyhow, here are more lyrics-

LOST CAUSE


As I lay, alone on my bed,
My body weighted, down like lead,
How will I pull myself from this hole?
Is this the true weight of my soul?

As I lay here, falsely serene,
Could my life just, all be a dream?

BUT THE LOAD AND PIERCING SHRIEKS
BRING ME CRASHING TO THE EARTH

Am I just another trapped soul,
in this God forsaken universe?

AND THE SCREAMS DO NOT CEASE
THE ATTACKS JUST INCREASE
AND I CAN'T FIND MY WAY
AM I STUCK IN A DAZE
LOST IN THE MAZE
BLIND IN THE HAZE
of my mind?

and the only reminder that I'm not yet dead,
are those piercing shrieks in my head,

They would strike me with fear,
but I feel too weary,
To even shed a tear,
for those hundreds tortured,
Screams that I hear.

I FEEL LIKE A MONSTER
I'VE LOST ALL COMPASSION
I USED TO BE SO SURE
OF WHERE TO FOCUS AGGRESSION
AND I CAN'T EVEN REMEMBER
WHAT MADE ME SO ANGRY
that I thought I could change the world.

But before I become so lost to myself,
That I can't find a way back,
Carry out my final request,
As me, not the monster I've become.

Rid me, and this world, of myself,
Before I become part of the problem,
I used to seek to destroy.

Belldandy wrote:

I can't really
> tell if you're being sarcastic here, but anyway. its the usual anti
> globalisation dogma. Nothing new, nothing different, and its repeated every WTO
> summit, and at other summits every year. Most of which end in minor rioting,
> violence, and looting. Some message eh ?


Well, just to clarify, it actually wasn't just about anti-globalisation. I could give a list of reasons why I hate such companies as Nike, but do you really want me to? Ah well, here's a quick list-

1) They search the world for 'better working environments' which means that they search for the p[oorest countries where labour is cheapest just to exploit it.

2) Despite the fact that they get huge profits on the stuff they sell due to their fashionable brand, they pay the workers a pittance becasue they can, since its a developing country.

3) They sell due to fashion, not due to quality of goods or anything, and what is fashion? It is people buying something becasue everyone else is, to show you can afford a particular brand. It basically encourages people to be sheep, and to judge on looks. Two things I hate.

Anyway, that wasn't as brief as I was going to be, but hey...

I've already posted this in life, but I guess no on much goes in there :P Anyway, I wrote it (typed it) and its not great, but what the hell, heres my poem I did a fe years ago;

Here In The Darkness

Here, in the darkness of the morning,
I cannot forget.
It’s like I’m mourning,
Filled with regret.

I miss you,
And nothing I can do,
Will bring you back, no,
I’m missing you, wanting you

Why did I never say goodbye ?
You never knew what I felt for you,
I’m missing you, never getting to say “hi”,
If there was anything I could do....

I miss you,
And nothing I can do
Will find you,
I want you.

Tears fill my eyes,
Emotions hidden inside
Begin to rise,
It’s like I’ve died.

I miss you,
And nothing I can do
Can help you,
I wish I could hold you,

My dreams are filled with the memory
Of the last time we spent together,
If only I had.......
I have lost you, Forever ?

I woke smiling,
It's rare to the eye,
A frown seemed more suitable at this time,
Only I'd know why.

Will I share this?
I can't say I will,
I've lied to much,
It's hard to balance right now.

If I fall will you save me?
If I trip would you reach out?
I'll never know the anwser?
You'll never know mine.

It's hard,
But why mind?
We'll never really get there,
The truth's a lie within us all.

Mr Nice Guy, Sibs. I like it all.

I wrote something the other day i will post soon, i love the anger which comes from Sibs, really expresses the feelings I think. The other form of expression which is strong and we can all relate to is love and Mr.Nice Guy used that :-)

Enjoying reading.

FilmBuff wrote:
RAW EMOTION! that has got to be the most insightful, collection of
> words, its a wake up call top any of you kids who are so stupid and cant see the
> light. this is a damning attack on modern society, this writer genius has
> tackled a subject never touched on in modern literature. ORIGINAL, GENIUS,
> INSIGHTFUL, LIFE CHANGING, WORTHY.

I can't really tell if you're being sarcastic here, but anyway. its the usual anti globalisation dogma. Nothing new, nothing different, and its repeated every WTO summit, and at other summits every year. Most of which end in minor rioting, violence, and looting. Some message eh ?

Can't you see it's all
> society
It's eating away our morals,
a slow decay of ideals,
Will there be no
> end to the casualties?

The Kids all follow the next big thing,
They're all
> so worried about fitting in,
Will they ever see the light?
Will we ever stand
> and fight,
Against this corrupt way of life?

Wear your Nike logo like a
> badge of pride,
Forget the child labour and those who died,
To give you your
> trendy f***in label,
to impress your trendy f***in friends,
You think you're
> so goddamn cool,
The multinationals are takin you for a fool!

So throw down
> your trendy labels,
f*** the fashion critics,
screw this superficial
> society,
And refuse to live up to their sick standards!

RAW EMOTION! that has got to be the most insightful, collection of words, its a wake up call top any of you kids who are so stupid and cant see the light. this is a damning attack on modern society, this writer genius has tackled a subject never touched on in modern literature. ORIGINAL, GENIUS, INSIGHTFUL, LIFE CHANGING, WORTHY.

what a guy.

This is the first song lyrics I wrote (I think...) about a month or two ago...

Anyways, the title is 'Slavery' where the 'V' is a Nike tick logo... (inspired by some sew on patch I saw somewhere...)


Can't you see it's all society
It's eating away our morals,
a slow decay of ideals,
Will there be no end to the casualties?

The Kids all follow the next big thing,
They're all so worried about fitting in,
Will they ever see the light?
Will we ever stand and fight,
Against this corrupt way of life?

Wear your Nike logo like a badge of pride,
Forget the child labour and those who died,
To give you your trendy in label,
to impress your trendy in friends,
You think you're so goddamn cool,
The multinationals are takin you for a fool!

So throw down your trendy labels,
the fashion critics,
screw this superficial society,
And refuse to live up to their sick standards!


Anyway, I will post the second song I wrote, but it needs some changes made, so maybe later...

Thanks, Grix and Sibs. The first one I actually made up just earlier on, thinking about this girl I know. I love reading through topics like this. It's really amazing what some people actually think of things and it really shows your views in a different light.

Sibs - you got MSN?!

[email protected], if you wanna add me.