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Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
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Serenading The Stars
I lie,
Calm,
Peace,
Restful,
On the grass in my garden,
Alone,
Away,
Just me,
And the stars,
And they shine,
Down on me only,
For in that moment,
True beauty is defined,
Just by those special somethings in the sky,
Nature,
All around me,
Civilisation?
Nowhere near,
A blanket of black,
Stretching forever,
And,
Ever,
Obscured by the atmosphere,
They shine,
They shine forever,
And,
Ever,
Shining down on me,
Speaking to me,
And me,
Only,
Beauty as a depiction,
And I start to sing,
I serenade the stars,
And they shine sweetly back,
Until morning,
When they fade away,
A ray of red is cast upon my shadowy form,
And it's time to leave,
But the night with the stars,
Me,
And me,
Only,
Tomorrow they'll be back,
For me,
And me,
Only,
They help me get through another day,
They don't judge me,
And they don't answer back,
They just listen,
To me,
And me,
Only,
They must rest,
Until the next night,
When I come back,
For them,
And them,
Only
I lie,
Calm,
Peace,
Restful,
On the grass in my garden,
Alone,
Away,
Just me,
And the stars,
And they shine,
Down on me only,
For in that moment,
True beauty is defined,
Just by those special somethings in the sky,
Nature,
All around me,
Civilisation?
Nowhere near,
A blanket of black,
Stretching forever,
And,
Ever,
Obscured by the atmosphere,
They shine,
They shine forever,
And,
Ever,
Shining down on me,
Speaking to me,
And me,
Only,
Beauty as a depiction,
And I start to sing,
I serenade the stars,
And they shine sweetly back,
Until morning,
When they fade away,
A ray of red is cast upon my shadowy form,
And it's time to leave,
But the night with the stars,
Me,
And me,
Only,
Tomorrow they'll be back,
For me,
And me,
Only,
They help me get through another day,
They don't judge me,
And they don't answer back,
They just listen,
To me,
And me,
Only,
They must rest,
Until the next night,
When I come back,
For them,
And them,
Only
I've written a fair few more sets of lyrics- I'll post them here some time later.
well, here are some lyrics I wrote when I got pretty annoyed with some people at my school:
YOU, Label Me,
Cos my mind is not like yours,
I, Threaten You,
By doing what I adore.
Another stand off, so insignificant,
They call us 'Freaks',
And try to steal away our pride,
But their power comes from acceptance,
That we don't need from their kind.
YOU, Hate Me,
Cos you don't like the way I dress?!?
I, Hate You,
For the abuse I always get.
Another stand off, so insignificant,
The 'trendy @ssholes',
Try to steal away the pride,
But we are strong in our unity,
And they can't take it whatever they try!
No matter what they try!
We'll fight till we die!
Even though I don't know why!
WHY?!?
DO YOU HATE ME?!?
YOU, Label Me,
Cos my mind is not like yours,
I, Threaten You,
By doing what I adore.
Another stand off, so insignificant,
They call us 'Freaks',
And try to steal away our pride,
But their power comes from acceptance,
That we don't need from their kind.
YOU, Hate Me,
Cos you don't like the way I dress?!?
I, Hate You,
For the abuse I always get.
Another stand off, so insignificant,
The 'trendy @ssholes',
Try to steal away the pride,
But we are strong in our unity,
And they can't take it whatever they try!
No matter what they try!
We'll fight till we die!
Even though I don't know why!
WHY?!?
DO YOU HATE ME?!?
Just by reading them I can see you two are right.
They were nice, very nice.
They were nice, very nice.
I had loads of poems and stories on my computer until my hard-disk got wiped.. I might write something tomorrow, if I have time.. and post it in here.
Until then. Adios.
Soft sounds of silent signs
scarcely spoken down telephone lines
whisper words that soon make sense
in vacant rooms lit burning red
That's a verse from a poem I wrote for someone. They haven't read it yet though. So I'll leave the rest for now.
And this is something she wrote, which I read a lot:
your voice is like a waterfall
the pounding cascades pressing me under your
fingertips
you fill me with delusions...hallucinations
imagining your breath on my cheek, a zephyr so sweet
it lingers in my soul for centuries.
this longing consumes me
until all i have left is this rubble of hope and refuse
kindled by your scent
and the softness of your hands.
stop looking me in the eye.
tell me i'm wrong, tell me i'm pitiful, tell me i'm useless
so i can let go of this impossible reverie.
but you don't. you smile, your teeth
more beautiful than anything i've ever created.
Until then. Adios.
Soft sounds of silent signs
scarcely spoken down telephone lines
whisper words that soon make sense
in vacant rooms lit burning red
That's a verse from a poem I wrote for someone. They haven't read it yet though. So I'll leave the rest for now.
And this is something she wrote, which I read a lot:
your voice is like a waterfall
the pounding cascades pressing me under your
fingertips
you fill me with delusions...hallucinations
imagining your breath on my cheek, a zephyr so sweet
it lingers in my soul for centuries.
this longing consumes me
until all i have left is this rubble of hope and refuse
kindled by your scent
and the softness of your hands.
stop looking me in the eye.
tell me i'm wrong, tell me i'm pitiful, tell me i'm useless
so i can let go of this impossible reverie.
but you don't. you smile, your teeth
more beautiful than anything i've ever created.
Gather up my fears,
They'll tell you some tales,
Read my book,
Please don't understand.
I'm going nowhere fast,
I know it,
You don't,
They don't.
They need not,
It's mine,
Lessons are here,
Reason sings.
It's soft,
Hardness gets nowhere.
It's rare,
I learnt.
I'm independent, me.
It'll all be fine,
I promise,
I lie.
They'll tell you some tales,
Read my book,
Please don't understand.
I'm going nowhere fast,
I know it,
You don't,
They don't.
They need not,
It's mine,
Lessons are here,
Reason sings.
It's soft,
Hardness gets nowhere.
It's rare,
I learnt.
I'm independent, me.
It'll all be fine,
I promise,
I lie.
Lend a hand, Its no problem.
I'll help you through those times.
Sliding down slowly, slide back up,
Peek, you have nothing,
In your shell, something.
Tears forcing to sink up,
There's no help for them,
There's help for you.
Your roots got so dry,
You grow to nothing,
why?
Hear me, give me an anwser.
Believe in tales you told me as a child,
Sitting, listening, I understand,
You were my influence,
Now i'd pray for you to float,
Hear me now? give me the anwser.
To the world your one but to one you are the world,
I am that one,
I am your saviour,
I'll never let go.
I'll help you through those times.
Sliding down slowly, slide back up,
Peek, you have nothing,
In your shell, something.
Tears forcing to sink up,
There's no help for them,
There's help for you.
Your roots got so dry,
You grow to nothing,
why?
Hear me, give me an anwser.
Believe in tales you told me as a child,
Sitting, listening, I understand,
You were my influence,
Now i'd pray for you to float,
Hear me now? give me the anwser.
To the world your one but to one you are the world,
I am that one,
I am your saviour,
I'll never let go.
Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
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