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Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?
Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.
Here is the thread for your thoughts.
I look forward to reading them,
MWA
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Those were very cool, Mr Nice Guy. They're almost like songs.
those words were touching... The first one was very interesting too... kind of uplifting I felt...
If only you were with me,
Standing by my side,
Life would seem so easy
My heart filled with pride,
But seeing you straying,
Straying from my heart,
Makes life seem not worth living
My world is torn apart.
Bearing all the pain as I see
You day by day,
If only things were simple
Life would be my way.
I know now of love
Especially for you,
But love works not both ways,
As your love for me is through.
Tolerance is the problem of a one way
Thought or care,
If only the feelings were mutual
Life would be so fair.
Deserts need to be crossed,
To make my love so clear
Knowing that every step I take
Time is hurrying near.
Have I really lost you?
Frightened you away,
Knowing that I've done so
Makes my heart begin to fray.
Standing by my side,
Life would seem so easy
My heart filled with pride,
But seeing you straying,
Straying from my heart,
Makes life seem not worth living
My world is torn apart.
Bearing all the pain as I see
You day by day,
If only things were simple
Life would be my way.
I know now of love
Especially for you,
But love works not both ways,
As your love for me is through.
Tolerance is the problem of a one way
Thought or care,
If only the feelings were mutual
Life would be so fair.
Deserts need to be crossed,
To make my love so clear
Knowing that every step I take
Time is hurrying near.
Have I really lost you?
Frightened you away,
Knowing that I've done so
Makes my heart begin to fray.
If only my heart would open truly,
My tears would continuously flow,
Through out my body filled with poison,
Stopping me from letting go.
So here I am in silence,
With no one by my side,
I should simply turn up the volume,
And swallow my pathetic pride.
But untill the day that happens
My tears will silentlly be,
Locked up in a heart so gloomy,
Longing to be set free.
My tears would continuously flow,
Through out my body filled with poison,
Stopping me from letting go.
So here I am in silence,
With no one by my side,
I should simply turn up the volume,
And swallow my pathetic pride.
But untill the day that happens
My tears will silentlly be,
Locked up in a heart so gloomy,
Longing to be set free.
Like the air
You pass me by
Never stopping to listen
Never wondering why
Never with a worry
Never with a care
Never noticing
If I were ever there
Like the air
You travel past
Never staying to watch
How time goes fast
Always pushing
past my side
As I never fought
or had no pride
Like the air
You give me hope
Pushing to one side
The line of rope
Somehow I wonder
How your beauty goes unseen
Your elegance and beauty
That of a queen
You pass me by
Never stopping to listen
Never wondering why
Never with a worry
Never with a care
Never noticing
If I were ever there
Like the air
You travel past
Never staying to watch
How time goes fast
Always pushing
past my side
As I never fought
or had no pride
Like the air
You give me hope
Pushing to one side
The line of rope
Somehow I wonder
How your beauty goes unseen
Your elegance and beauty
That of a queen
Nice, monkey_W_A... I will probably post a few songs here later... well they're noit actually new, the first two I wrote, but I haven't put em up here though... I think I posted them in the Ninty WLT ages ago...
Anyway, I'll see what I can do later.
Anyway, I'll see what I can do later.
I put music to this before I done the words, it was done a few months back. It was one of the first projects I done with my acoustic guitar away from a two man thing me and a friend had going. We are hoping to extend the two man thing in the summer with a full band, something to look forward to. We had a few songs, they were nice.
This is something I play and sing alot as it's something I can just pick up and play, I like that.
Anyway:
I'm coming to this town again,
Where I was raised and born as a child.
My mother told me that I was young and feeble,
And I shouldn't mix with the crowd.
But she is not one to tell me,
What I should and shouldn't do.
So I went away tall and valient,
And my mother was left alone.
Alone and afraid
I know I'm not your cover,
And I know you won't pull over,
But stop for a minute,
Look at me,
Look i'm going down.
So you may bring a tear to my eye,
But it will never happen again.
I was crying to get my face wet,
It had nothing to do with you then.
Now I'm older I'll say fcuk right off,
You cant tell me what to do.
Now I'm left here tall and valient,
And nothing can get in my way.
Its too late to say goodbye
I just want to let it out,
But now I don't really know.
This is something I play and sing alot as it's something I can just pick up and play, I like that.
Anyway:
I'm coming to this town again,
Where I was raised and born as a child.
My mother told me that I was young and feeble,
And I shouldn't mix with the crowd.
But she is not one to tell me,
What I should and shouldn't do.
So I went away tall and valient,
And my mother was left alone.
Alone and afraid
I know I'm not your cover,
And I know you won't pull over,
But stop for a minute,
Look at me,
Look i'm going down.
So you may bring a tear to my eye,
But it will never happen again.
I was crying to get my face wet,
It had nothing to do with you then.
Now I'm older I'll say fcuk right off,
You cant tell me what to do.
Now I'm left here tall and valient,
And nothing can get in my way.
Its too late to say goodbye
I just want to let it out,
But now I don't really know.
Flang and Floomph......what?
They're my words.
They're my words.
FilmBuff wrote:
> Monkey_With_Attitude wrote:
Words are powerful...
correct. but not any of
> these words (bar mine).
Methinks that Bumfluff is someone with another account...
> Monkey_With_Attitude wrote:
Words are powerful...
correct. but not any of
> these words (bar mine).
Methinks that Bumfluff is someone with another account...
Monkey_With_Attitude wrote:
> I've seen you yet never saw you,
I've listened to you yet never heard
> you,
I've felt you yet never touched you,
I sometimes wonder do I even know
> you?
I'll always wonder,
I'll never know.
so? too bad. why are you telling ME, why are you clogging these forums with crap like this? its this kind of crap that is sending this SR site slowly to the pits of Hell.
Keep your swag thoughts to your own.
> I've seen you yet never saw you,
I've listened to you yet never heard
> you,
I've felt you yet never touched you,
I sometimes wonder do I even know
> you?
I'll always wonder,
I'll never know.
so? too bad. why are you telling ME, why are you clogging these forums with crap like this? its this kind of crap that is sending this SR site slowly to the pits of Hell.
Keep your swag thoughts to your own.
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