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It seems that from time to time people will post a poem but it is awkward to find somewhere to post it. Life or General seem to be the two forums people favour so I think it would be a good idea to have a thread just for submitting poems to so that people who are interested in reading poetry or submitting there own have a thread in which to do so instead of trawling through the backlogs of posts.
Feel free to submit anything of a poetical nature to this thread as well as comments on people's writing.
Feel free to submit anything of a poetical nature to this thread as well as comments on people's writing.
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PLEASE tell me you were just playing along.
Black Glove - where do you enter them?
Thanks, i have won loadsa prizes fr my poems. However i stole them all from Alec...
I dont know where to find a competition to enter my stuff into.
I was hoping Black Glove would contribute to this thread - his poems are excellent.
I was hoping Black Glove would contribute to this thread - his poems are excellent.
Liked the depressing ones more. Then again I am a pessimist. No, people are just too damned lazy and pathetic to read and comment. Not all of them (in fact some are excellent at commenting), but a large number. I'm telling you, enter some of this stuff into competitions, its gold.
Do people read anymore?
*dies*
*dies*
My mates said my poems were a bit depressive so I tried something a little more upbeat.
I witness your blonde locks blowing in the breeze
I hear your soft Siren’s call
You are my beautiful blue-eyed temptress
To whose knee’s I would gladly fall.
When I think it is only of you
When I close my eyes, you’re all I see
You’re an incomparable elegant goddess
And your love shall set me free.
I witness your blonde locks blowing in the breeze
I hear your soft Siren’s call
You are my beautiful blue-eyed temptress
To whose knee’s I would gladly fall.
When I think it is only of you
When I close my eyes, you’re all I see
You’re an incomparable elegant goddess
And your love shall set me free.
Here is something a little more serious I just composed, I call it "Thankful"
The darkness wrapped around my throat
Choking the life from me
A thousand eyes this twilight has
Each one unwilling to see
It’s life, I know, this inherent urge
To look after number one
Uncaring about our fellow man
So what if they’ve lost or won?
Carefully now I softly tread
Along the edge of a knife
And as I lay down in my bed
I’m still thankful for this life.
The darkness wrapped around my throat
Choking the life from me
A thousand eyes this twilight has
Each one unwilling to see
It’s life, I know, this inherent urge
To look after number one
Uncaring about our fellow man
So what if they’ve lost or won?
Carefully now I softly tread
Along the edge of a knife
And as I lay down in my bed
I’m still thankful for this life.
Lol, cheers for the contribution Alec, was rather funny to read.
Sorry for all the typos, didn't bother to check it.
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