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> Mi/\\/dfrig wrote:
> RastaBillySkank, that was more similar to lyrics than a poem but
> still it was very good !
>
> Yeah I know, wrote it at 4am about a month ago. Couldn't sleep. Was
> feeling de rhyme at de time (ayyyy :-D) so just went with it.
hey..i do that
> RastaBillySkank, that was more similar to lyrics than a poem but
> still it was very good !
Yeah I know, wrote it at 4am about a month ago. Couldn't sleep. Was feeling de rhyme at de time (ayyyy :-D) so just went with it.
RastaBillySkank, that was more similar to lyrics than a poem but still it was very good !
Hold me, hold me,
Twist the knife and look me in the eye,
Tell me, just tell me,
We’re friends ‘til we die,
Friends ‘til we die
Release me, release me,
Believe me,
I want it peacefully,
No mess,
No fuss, nothing should be heard,
It’s the least he deserves,
It’s the least I could do,
For a friend,
For a friend,
Lay me down,
Gently, oh so gently,
Your artist’s hands,
Your cold eyes,
The promise,
That we’re friends ‘til
We die,
‘Til we die,
‘Til I die
In a world where passion is fortune
In a life where love is fame
Among all things precious and full of glory
Some would say they play a ‘fools game’
Staring into darkness
Trapped in a lonely tunnel
A never ending passage
Pretending they ‘know all’
With a hand, full of sorrow
And a hat full of tricks
How could they lose this game?
Really it’s themselves they cannot fix
A multitude of misfortunes
Followed by the stench of brandy and debt
An account of I O U’s, that will never be kept
Broken hearts fall down, but luck is never up.
Souls are sold to uniforms
Trapped inside four walls
Fact is they’ve been dead for years now
And they are remembered as ‘just fools!’
By me
wow i'm a genious.
Two things
a) my tagline
b) it's black glove NOT bl@ck glove
> PLEASE tell me you were just playing along.
I'm sleepy and switching between coursework and the forums.
I fell for it initially yeh!
heh.
I was lied to...