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Fri 16/05/03 at 14:50
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This (as the name suggests) is the OFFICIAL poetry and Hai-ku thread for the Special Reserve Forums. Naturally this thread is open to all members with creative talent and even ones who are just doing it for a laugh. Post all your creative works here and let the rest of the forum admire it! Give poetry a try, you never know, you might like it :D Here are a few terms to help you get started with poetry.

Key:
Stanza - One of the divisions of a poem, composed of two or more lines usually characterized by a common pattern of meter, rhyme, and number of lines.

Hai-ku - A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Poem - A verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme.
Thu 22/05/03 at 16:29
"Darth Vader 3442321"
Posts: 4,031
Open to
suggestion
closed to
revolution
happy to
oblidge
sad to
sing

my ding a ling, my ding a ling, oh why won't you play with my ding a ling?
Thu 22/05/03 at 16:30
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"Orbiting Uranus"
Posts: 5,665
hehe

Your too good for this place.
Thu 22/05/03 at 16:33
"Darth Vader 3442321"
Posts: 4,031
Rosalind wrote:
> hehe
>
> Your too good for this place.

And on that note I'm off for a KFC and a viewbox of Matrix Reloaded....

Then a quick wan

anyway must dash.
Thu 22/05/03 at 16:36
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"Orbiting Uranus"
Posts: 5,665
Not in the poetry thread....
you'll get it all messy.
Fri 23/05/03 at 10:41
"Darth Vader 3442321"
Posts: 4,031
Rosalind wrote:
> Not in the poetry thread....
> you'll get it all messy.

KFC Fap rap

fap fap my drumstick
greasy chicken on the bone
err on the side of caution
never spit just swallow.

Mmmm finger licking good
tastes like no other cockrel could.

*I've a mind like a dorty poivert*
Fri 23/05/03 at 16:02
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i wanna read some of this haiku.
Fri 23/05/03 at 16:04
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"Orbiting Uranus"
Posts: 5,665
There are a couple near the beginning of the thread
Fri 23/05/03 at 16:07
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Rosalind wrote:
> My first attempt at Haiku...
>
> invading hands touch;
> trailing along my skin to
> find a secret place

heh, saucy :D
Fri 23/05/03 at 16:10
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Posts: 10,437
The sagacious one wrote:
> KFC Fap rap
>
> fap fap my drumstick
> greasy chicken on the bone
> err on the side of caution
> never spit just swallow.
>
> Mmmm finger licking good
> tastes like no other cockrel could.
>
> *I've a mind like a dorty poivert*

Brrilliant. Best thign I've seen all week :-D
Fri 23/05/03 at 16:10
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aliboy - your tagline, is the next part "Hey Jude..."?

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