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Fri 16/05/03 at 14:50
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This (as the name suggests) is the OFFICIAL poetry and Hai-ku thread for the Special Reserve Forums. Naturally this thread is open to all members with creative talent and even ones who are just doing it for a laugh. Post all your creative works here and let the rest of the forum admire it! Give poetry a try, you never know, you might like it :D Here are a few terms to help you get started with poetry.

Key:
Stanza - One of the divisions of a poem, composed of two or more lines usually characterized by a common pattern of meter, rhyme, and number of lines.

Hai-ku - A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Poem - A verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme.
Fri 16/05/03 at 15:43
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Bahlies.
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:02
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"Sex On Wheels"
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If only your poem was original froots...
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:11
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Fine, I shall do another.
Ahem. *clears throat*
This poem is called, 'My Phallus.'


'So Big.'


YeY.
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:12
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"aka memo aaka gayby"
Posts: 11,948
This is my poem, dedicated to the memory of a loving sock:

you kept my foot warm,
through rain and sleet,
you didn't give up,
fought for truth and justice.

Until!
the holes appeared,
you became weak,
disgusted me,
a disgrace to your society,

I lit the fire,
it burned,
hot, as you had kept my feet, but more so,
you died, became a crisp, a memory.
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:17
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"no longer El Blokey"
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All the syllables
Are pretty hard to fit in
But I still did it
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:33
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"Light of the world"
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Standing in the centre
In a black circle ring
Surrounded by the future
and what it may bring
Thousands of paths infront of me
Winding and Enticing
Twisted roads, which one to take?
The challenge is deciding.
So many opportunities
Even more traps and red herrings
Thrown into a pit of confusion
Mind cluttered with it's findings
Scared and exited
Life is the biggest game
We all compete against each other
is society to blame?
I have been given a lifetime
A lifetime I will live
But so many things I want to do
To which one shall I give?
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:35
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The 2nd one.
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:39
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"Picking a winner!"
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Don't know if this is a poem or not but anyway I wrote it a while ago, some may have already read it

Thinking about the past
The chances that I missed
The events that could have changed me,
The pretty girls I tried to kiss
All the things I never did,
The places I wanted to see,
If I could live my life over again,
Is this the man I'd be?

I don't want to regret the chances
that I failed to take or missed
Those holidays of a lifetime
Or the girls I could have kissed
If I could have took them when they came
and not turned them down, passed them by,
I wouldn't be here waiting
for a second chance before I die.

Like the death of a parent
A loved one or a friend
You missed the chance to say goodbye
Before the tragic end
What would you give to tell them
that you love them, that you care
How much is the second chance worth?

Could you pluck it from the sky
Or wrap it up as the perfect gift
Is it something we all would buy?
Or just a priceless wish

I don't want to regret the chances
that I failed to take or missed
Those holidays of a lifetime
Or the girls I could have kissed
If I could have took them when they came
and not turned them down, passed them by,
I wouldn't be here waiting
for a second chance before I die.
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:42
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"Light of the world"
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Thats most definatly a poem...and thats most definatly the B**locks
Fri 16/05/03 at 16:45
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"aka memo aaka gayby"
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Explain.

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