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"Your Words"

Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?

Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.

Here is the thread for your thoughts.


I look forward to reading them,
MWA

Human Race


For fame and fortune,
We run the gauntlet,
We fight each other,
Why can't we, work together?
Every man for himself,
In the human race.

You win (you win),
I lose (I lose),
You run, but I refuse,
You win (you win),
I lose (I lose),
You run, but I refuse,
You ware yourself out,
I'll save my strength,
You ware yourself down,
I'll stay the length.

Run around their race,
Keep up with their pace,
They set all the rules,
While we, fight like fools,
There's only one winner,
In the human race.

You win (YOU WIN),
I lose (I LOSE),
You run, but I REFUSE,
You win (YOU WIN),
I lose (I LOSE),
You run, but I REFUSE,

And I win in the end,
Because I can defend,
What I believe in,
While you are left with NOTHING!

YOU WIN!
I LOSE!
YOU RUN, I REFUSE!
YOU WIN!
I LOSE!
YOU RUN, I REFUSE!

But I win IN THE END!
Because I CAN DEFEND!
What I believe in,
While you are, left with, NOTHING!



Hmm... I quite like that one. Don't know why, just think it's a bit better than a lot of the others I've done. What do you think...?

RastaBillySkank wrote:
> I really hate poems that rhyme.

I should change that to: Poems that rhyme for the sake of rhyming. THAT annoys the hell out of me.

A small haiku

I am always late
The teachers elaborate
I cannot be late

God I'm bored

I really hate poems that rhyme. Songs that rhyme are fine, but when poems rhyme it annoys the hell out of me. Bah...

*wanders off*

A Moonlight River

When that tsunami of darkness,
Crashes over this dreary land,
And the animals that can walk and talk,
Go to bed for the night,

The moon comes out,
Finally getting a look in,
No longer blocked by the Sun,
And glows,

Exuberant in its existence,
It shines its torch,
A Moonlight River,
Cascades down from the heavens,
Gushing down onto the Earth
And tries to wash the pain away,

Gently ebbing down from on high,
It flows,
And its sediment is are emotions,
And its tributaries are our prayers,
And its watershed is our dreams,

And when the morning comes,
The river will no longer exist,
And we will be able to carry on,
For just that one more day

I think this topic may suit the life forum better, but when it was made the life forum ahdn't been created.

I just think we'll keep going in here for now. I like the atmosphere here at times, reading through somethings not only teach me about the writer as an individual but also about other things which should be remembered.

Seems we have about three active posters in this topic, I like that. A few more minds work would be nice but at the moemnt I like the pace.

We all have our own style in here, thats the thing I love.

I like the way a tale can be told,
Though the writers a million miles away.
I like the way a image is sent,
But it's just less vivid during the day.

Sitting and staring I'd see things there,
Things I've never seen before.
I'd like to thank someone for that,
But I wonder what I'd be thanking them for.

I can join things dot to dot,
To me it's a special art.
You may look young in your mirror,
But is that really who you are?

The way I join it's such a pretty pattern,
Something I could never dream.
Trace with me a line,
Then maybe we'll see it's means.

Scattered like rainfall,
I watch them fly,
Are they in stalemate?
Or is the battle just maybe a little dry?

I ask myself questions,
I'd tell myself the right anwser.
I'd awake to find lies,
The more I think they come faster.

Why can't it come right?
I struggle it seems.
Maybe one day it will fall,
Then my passion for subjects I think may slowly gleam.

Until then I wait,
For the event to happen,
Come sooner I beg,
But for then i'll just keep thinking.

Moonlight Dawning

The daylights fading,
The moonlights dawning,
What have I done today?
Burn't bridges,
Bridges that led,
Back to my old self,

The daylights fading,
The moonlights dawning,
What did I plan to do today?
I planned a lot different to what I did,
Target's are different from accomplishments,

The daylights fading,
The moonlights dawning,
What haven't I done today?
I accomplished lots,
Not what I'd planned though,

The daylights fading,
The moonlights dawning,
What's there to do today?
This ghost town is only living,
In shadows of fading memories,

The daylights fading,
The moonlights dawning,
What am I going to do tomorrow?

The daylights fading,
The moonlights dawning,
What am I going to do for the rest of my days,

The daylights faded,
The moonlights gone,
And my life just goes round and round,

________________


Bollcoks I know, but meh :-)

--->JUMP FOR FREEDOM<---

(bits in brackets are what I would want to happen musically, to the instruments...)



1, 2, 3, 4, JUMP!

Jump, jump, jump! Jump for FREEDOM!
Jump, jump, jump! Jump for FREEDOM!
Jump, jump, jump! Jump for FREEDOM!

You've gotta JUMP for FREEDOM
We've gotta JUMP for FREEDOM

Jump for Freedom! Jump, For Freedom!
Jump for Freedom! Jump, For Freedom!
Jump for Freedom! Jump, For Freedom!

Jump, jump, jump! JUMP for FREEDOM!!!

(instruments die down, play very quitely)

They do not know who we are,
They do not know what we are,
You've gotta raise you voice in demand,
We've gotta break from their COMMAND!

(Instruments fire up again, full volume!)

JUMP JUMP JUMP! JUMP FOR FREEDOM!!!
1, 2, 3, JUMP FOR FREEDOM!!!
JUMP JUMP JUMP! JUMP FOR FREEDOM!!!

JUMP FOR FREEDOM! JUMP FOR FREEDOM!
JUMP FOR FREEDOM! JUMP FOR FREEDOM!
JUMP FOR FREEDOM! JUMP FOR FREEDOM!
NOW!!!

(everything fades out, except drums, which gradually increase volume and tempo...)

JUUUUUUUUUUMP!!!
jump, jump, jump- Jump for FREEDOM
jump, jump, jump- Jump for FREEDOM
jump, jump, jump- Jump for FREEDOM

jump jump jump, jump, jump jump
jump jump jump, jump, jump jump
jump jump jump, jump, jump jump

jump (X100, really, really fast)

NOW!
JUMP! NOW!
JUMP! NOW!
JUMP! NOW!

JUMP! For FREEDOM!


probably not the best lyrics, but I can imagine that turning into a good song...

I can't believe you,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe that you would stoop so f**kin low,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe that you would sell your f**kin soul,
For a few moments of fame,
Do you have no shame?

I can't believe you,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe that you would sell your f**kin soul,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe that you would stoop so f**kin low,
You stole a beggars change,
When he needed your aid,
And now you need my aid,
But I know you haven't changed!

I can't believe you,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe that you used to be my friend,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe you,
I can't believe that you never made amends,
You had your thousandth chance,
You never thought it'd be your last!

I will not help YOU!
You're gonna pay,
For the s*i* you put others THROUGH!
Maybe someday,
You will have learned from your mistakes,
And then you will,
CHANGE!