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"Your Words"

Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?

Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.

Here is the thread for your thoughts.


I look forward to reading them,
MWA

Yeah, I did connect the others with drink after the explanation. The 'No heart in their pattern' line made me think of just doing something for the sake of it, which turned out to be getting drunk, and the last three lines just made me think about things that seem like really big things when you're doing them, but when you reflect and think about them, they seem so insignificant...

Sibs wrote:
the rest I did not connect with being
> drunk or anything similar at all.


But you did once you had read my explanation?

That's the thing I like about words and lyrics. No matter how many times you listen you will still be wondering what they mean. Things that make you think for the good rule.

It's interesting how someone can get inspiration from something, and then when someone reads the words they don't connect it with that subject matter.

The line about stopping for fuel did make me think about drinking, but not as in alcohol. More like stopping for a drink to quench your thirst... for some reason... the rest I did not connect with being drunk or anything similar at all.

> A life's something that is hurt by something it's not demanding,
> Yet stopping for the fuel is the anwser and so the birds move on,

Here I am saying people drink and put the liquid into their body though their body does not want it there but people do.


> They're mimicing the same song,
> No trust in their formation,
> No heart in their pattern.

Comparing the patterns and actions of birds to people who are drunk. They sing the same song - They act like one another. As they fly in a flock and make those patterns in the sky they just follow each other not knowing where it may take them or what they may do.


> When rest occurs they ponder for what has been achieved,
> It's so sad to see them think,
> And so sad to feel they've found nothing.

When they are sober they think for what they have achieved whilst drunk and in the end, though they don't say they do you can feel they've achived nothing but they still boast about getting drunk.

Why can't we just have fun sober? If I can, why can't nobody else? Why do I have to blend in, I'm me.

Samn as RBS I feel. The two lines he mentioned are good, and I also think the last two lines are great too.

Hmmm... not entirely sure what that was about, but I did like it. Loved the "No trust in their formation, no heart in their pattern" lines.

Just wrote this, something that's going on in my mind tonight. Something that's troubling.


FLIGHT


A life's something that is hurt by something it's not demanding,
Yet stopping for the fuel is the anwser and so the birds move on,
They're mimicing the same song,
No trust in their formation,
No heart in their pattern.

When rest occurs they ponder for what has been achieved,
It's so sad to see them think,
And so sad to feel they've found nothing.

Ooh. Glad people like it.

Sibs wrote:
> Hmm... I quite like that one. Don't know why, just think it's a bit
> better than a lot of the others I've done. What do you think...?


heh agreed (not that your others were bad, all very good), nice :-)

That was great, Sibs.