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"It'll never work," screamed Swish.
"its the only way. We've got to try," replied Shocky in a much calmer manner. "MJs life is in our hands, so it's either now or never".
"NOW!!!," both of them shouted. With an almighty leap they bounded forward into the Time_Warp. In a blur of colour the duo were sucked back to a time just before the great battle of the FOG.
"OUCH!," complained Shocky as he landed on the concrete floor. Swish however was slightly luckier. He had, had a much softer landing...on top of Spider that is.
"Sorry Spider," apologised Swish as he clambered off of the mangled body of Spider. Almost as quickly as Spider had been knocked down he was back on his eight legs and Swish had noticed that he didn't look happy.
"I'm gonna kick the cra......oh its you Swish," Spider said. Swish looked very relieved as he knew that Spider was already angry with him because of him immitating him.
"Hang on a sec, thats not actually happened yet," Swish thought to himself. "Look Spider we have something to tell yuo and we are not sure if your going to believe us," Swish said.
"Well carry on then," Spider replied.
"The thing is Spider, we are Swish and Shocky it's just we are from the near future. Wait dont speak yet. You see we have come back to try and stop MJ dying," Shocky explained.
"MJs going to die....good. I never did like him, well I did but anyway thats another story. What has all of this got to do with me then. As you can see I dont really care what happens to M......," Spider gets inturrupted mid sentence.
"No Spider you dont seem to understand MJ does like you it's just he hasn't apologised yet," Swish tells Spider.
"Okay now I'm confused. Er....I guess I'm in though," Spider mumbles.
Spider Swish and Shocky begin the long walk to the spot where the battle of the FOG would soon take place. Before long Spider realises something very important, " by the way if you two aren't the Swish and Shocky from the present doesn't that mean that there is two Swishs and two Shockys walking around".
"Actually that is a very good point, we better go see the Webmaster and get our names changed before we go any further. Just imagine if we met the present day Swish and Shocky. The results would be catastrophic," Shocky says to Swish and Spider. So the three decide to take a slight detour and head off to the Webmasters office on Turbonutter Avenue.
Some time later........
"Wow this is the Webmasters office?" exclaims Shocky
"Yeah it is. Pretty amazing isn't it......" replies Spider.
"Amazingly cr@ppy that is"
To be continued (hopefully tommorrow)
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(;o|
"its the only way. We've got to try," replied Shocky in a much calmer manner. "MJs life is in our hands, so it's either now or never".
"NOW!!!," both of them shouted. With an almighty leap they bounded forward into the Time_Warp. In a blur of colour the duo were sucked back to a time just before the great battle of the FOG.
"OUCH!," complained Shocky as he landed on the concrete floor. Swish however was slightly luckier. He had, had a much softer landing...on top of Spider that is.
"Sorry Spider," apologised Swish as he clambered off of the mangled body of Spider. Almost as quickly as Spider had been knocked down he was back on his eight legs and Swish had noticed that he didn't look happy.
"I'm gonna kick the cra......oh its you Swish," Spider said. Swish looked very relieved as he knew that Spider was already angry with him because of him immitating him.
"Hang on a sec, thats not actually happened yet," Swish thought to himself. "Look Spider we have something to tell yuo and we are not sure if your going to believe us," Swish said.
"Well carry on then," Spider replied.
"The thing is Spider, we are Swish and Shocky it's just we are from the near future. Wait dont speak yet. You see we have come back to try and stop MJ dying," Shocky explained.
"MJs going to die....good. I never did like him, well I did but anyway thats another story. What has all of this got to do with me then. As you can see I dont really care what happens to M......," Spider gets inturrupted mid sentence.
"No Spider you dont seem to understand MJ does like you it's just he hasn't apologised yet," Swish tells Spider.
"Okay now I'm confused. Er....I guess I'm in though," Spider mumbles.
Spider Swish and Shocky begin the long walk to the spot where the battle of the FOG would soon take place. Before long Spider realises something very important, " by the way if you two aren't the Swish and Shocky from the present doesn't that mean that there is two Swishs and two Shockys walking around".
"Actually that is a very good point, we better go see the Webmaster and get our names changed before we go any further. Just imagine if we met the present day Swish and Shocky. The results would be catastrophic," Shocky says to Swish and Spider. So the three decide to take a slight detour and head off to the Webmasters office on Turbonutter Avenue.
Some time later........
"Wow this is the Webmasters office?" exclaims Shocky
"Yeah it is. Pretty amazing isn't it......" replies Spider.
"Amazingly cr@ppy that is"
To be continued (hopefully tommorrow)
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(;o|
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Namostar wrote:
> Yes - it is nice to include people in a story who aren't usually
> included, it shows that people appriciate them. I think I might
> write another, a good idea just blew into my head.
Best get to
> work then!:D
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Namostar! I am afraid I have bad news for you. Someone is going to die. Either you or Shocky. Not sure who but look out for any Snipers.
Good luck with the story.
> Yes - it is nice to include people in a story who aren't usually
> included, it shows that people appriciate them. I think I might
> write another, a good idea just blew into my head.
Best get to
> work then!:D
******
Namostar! I am afraid I have bad news for you. Someone is going to die. Either you or Shocky. Not sure who but look out for any Snipers.
Good luck with the story.
Quazimodo wrote:
> Can i be a mad man who trys to disect spider.........lol
Very funny that Quazi. I would have considered it as well. The only problem is that Sniper has already blown his brain matter out of his head (not that there was much in it anyways.)
Where is the arachnid anyways? He must have been banned by his MUM! LOL.
Ice Blaster I will think about it. I don't get to talk to you that much but maybe. I need to get further into the story and then begin to get more people into the story. So far the whole thing has more or less been an intro. Keep an eye out in the next few days.
> Can i be a mad man who trys to disect spider.........lol
Very funny that Quazi. I would have considered it as well. The only problem is that Sniper has already blown his brain matter out of his head (not that there was much in it anyways.)
Where is the arachnid anyways? He must have been banned by his MUM! LOL.
Ice Blaster I will think about it. I don't get to talk to you that much but maybe. I need to get further into the story and then begin to get more people into the story. So far the whole thing has more or less been an intro. Keep an eye out in the next few days.
Can i be a mad man who trys to disect spider.........lol
I did, can I be added?
Ice Blaster wrote:
> POP. Oh, it was already at the top- well I treid!
Hmmm GP never read it. I cannot add him to the story if he hasn't read it yet.
> POP. Oh, it was already at the top- well I treid!
Hmmm GP never read it. I cannot add him to the story if he hasn't read it yet.
POP. Oh, it was already at the top- well I treid!
POPAROONI! Look at the post that was posted on 03/07/2001 at 6.39PM.
Hmmm i have just realised that I am basically the only person that has been POPping this thread.
Hmmm i have just realised that I am basically the only person that has been POPping this thread.
Namostar wrote:
> Cool! I like that part! I also like it when my name gets changed in
> the story from Swish to Namostar - very creative!
Well done.
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Glad to see you liked it Namo*. No one else seems very interested in it. Must be because I am quite new and I have not put any of the normal people in the story. It is good to get some other poeple in the stories isn't it like you did.
:)
> Cool! I like that part! I also like it when my name gets changed in
> the story from Swish to Namostar - very creative!
Well done.
******
Glad to see you liked it Namo*. No one else seems very interested in it. Must be because I am quite new and I have not put any of the normal people in the story. It is good to get some other poeple in the stories isn't it like you did.
:)
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