The "General Games Chat" forum, which includes Retro Game Reviews, has been archived and is now read-only. You cannot post here or create a new thread or review on this forum.
"It'll never work," screamed Swish.
"its the only way. We've got to try," replied Shocky in a much calmer manner. "MJs life is in our hands, so it's either now or never".
"NOW!!!," both of them shouted. With an almighty leap they bounded forward into the Time_Warp. In a blur of colour the duo were sucked back to a time just before the great battle of the FOG.
"OUCH!," complained Shocky as he landed on the concrete floor. Swish however was slightly luckier. He had, had a much softer landing...on top of Spider that is.
"Sorry Spider," apologised Swish as he clambered off of the mangled body of Spider. Almost as quickly as Spider had been knocked down he was back on his eight legs and Swish had noticed that he didn't look happy.
"I'm gonna kick the cra......oh its you Swish," Spider said. Swish looked very relieved as he knew that Spider was already angry with him because of him immitating him.
"Hang on a sec, thats not actually happened yet," Swish thought to himself. "Look Spider we have something to tell yuo and we are not sure if your going to believe us," Swish said.
"Well carry on then," Spider replied.
"The thing is Spider, we are Swish and Shocky it's just we are from the near future. Wait dont speak yet. You see we have come back to try and stop MJ dying," Shocky explained.
"MJs going to die....good. I never did like him, well I did but anyway thats another story. What has all of this got to do with me then. As you can see I dont really care what happens to M......," Spider gets inturrupted mid sentence.
"No Spider you dont seem to understand MJ does like you it's just he hasn't apologised yet," Swish tells Spider.
"Okay now I'm confused. Er....I guess I'm in though," Spider mumbles.
Spider Swish and Shocky begin the long walk to the spot where the battle of the FOG would soon take place. Before long Spider realises something very important, " by the way if you two aren't the Swish and Shocky from the present doesn't that mean that there is two Swishs and two Shockys walking around".
"Actually that is a very good point, we better go see the Webmaster and get our names changed before we go any further. Just imagine if we met the present day Swish and Shocky. The results would be catastrophic," Shocky says to Swish and Spider. So the three decide to take a slight detour and head off to the Webmasters office on Turbonutter Avenue.
Some time later........
"Wow this is the Webmasters office?" exclaims Shocky
"Yeah it is. Pretty amazing isn't it......" replies Spider.
"Amazingly cr@ppy that is"
To be continued (hopefully tommorrow)
**************
(;o|
"its the only way. We've got to try," replied Shocky in a much calmer manner. "MJs life is in our hands, so it's either now or never".
"NOW!!!," both of them shouted. With an almighty leap they bounded forward into the Time_Warp. In a blur of colour the duo were sucked back to a time just before the great battle of the FOG.
"OUCH!," complained Shocky as he landed on the concrete floor. Swish however was slightly luckier. He had, had a much softer landing...on top of Spider that is.
"Sorry Spider," apologised Swish as he clambered off of the mangled body of Spider. Almost as quickly as Spider had been knocked down he was back on his eight legs and Swish had noticed that he didn't look happy.
"I'm gonna kick the cra......oh its you Swish," Spider said. Swish looked very relieved as he knew that Spider was already angry with him because of him immitating him.
"Hang on a sec, thats not actually happened yet," Swish thought to himself. "Look Spider we have something to tell yuo and we are not sure if your going to believe us," Swish said.
"Well carry on then," Spider replied.
"The thing is Spider, we are Swish and Shocky it's just we are from the near future. Wait dont speak yet. You see we have come back to try and stop MJ dying," Shocky explained.
"MJs going to die....good. I never did like him, well I did but anyway thats another story. What has all of this got to do with me then. As you can see I dont really care what happens to M......," Spider gets inturrupted mid sentence.
"No Spider you dont seem to understand MJ does like you it's just he hasn't apologised yet," Swish tells Spider.
"Okay now I'm confused. Er....I guess I'm in though," Spider mumbles.
Spider Swish and Shocky begin the long walk to the spot where the battle of the FOG would soon take place. Before long Spider realises something very important, " by the way if you two aren't the Swish and Shocky from the present doesn't that mean that there is two Swishs and two Shockys walking around".
"Actually that is a very good point, we better go see the Webmaster and get our names changed before we go any further. Just imagine if we met the present day Swish and Shocky. The results would be catastrophic," Shocky says to Swish and Spider. So the three decide to take a slight detour and head off to the Webmasters office on Turbonutter Avenue.
Some time later........
"Wow this is the Webmasters office?" exclaims Shocky
"Yeah it is. Pretty amazing isn't it......" replies Spider.
"Amazingly cr@ppy that is"
To be continued (hopefully tommorrow)
**************
(;o|
Page:
Hey MJ, you've got your name wrong. He's actually called Shortee Blitz not Shorty. Just thought I'd let you know.
"Come on then Swish go and knock on the door then," said Shocky.
"Why should I do it. Your the Shocktrooper and as I have heard thr webmaster can get angry so I think that you should do it Shocky," replied Swish.
"Fine then I'll do it," Shocky said in an annoyed voice. Shocky slowly shuffled up to the door. Raising his hand he prepared to knock. BANG! the door flew open and came off its hinges........
"Have you got my GBA!..... oh your not the postman are you? You'd think that I'd already have one seeing as I work for SR wouldn't you? Anyway I suppose that you'd better come in," said the Webmaster, which to be honest was in some freaky sounding voice. The three of them hesitated...., " I said COME IN!" shouted the Webmaster.
"Okay, okay. Dont get your HTML in a twist," replied Swish in a cocky voice. Slowly Spider, Swish and Shocky entered the Webmasters office. All three looked at each in amazement as they saw the contents of the office.
"Dont look at each other like that, I have everything I need for my job. A god old Pc and a huge lightening quick....36k modem. Hmm I see what you mean now. Anyway what are you here for?"
"No wonder it takes him ages to update the site," Spider muttered under his breath.
"What was that Spider?" the Webmaster asked.
"I said Swish and Shocky need to change their names. Can you help them?" replied Spider.
"Of course I can. They dont call me the Webmaster for nothing. Okay so what do you want your new names to be then.....?" the Webmaster asked.
"Hmmm I am not sure really haven't had much time to think about it. Well I'll be called...Namostar... yeah. Namostar," Swish decided.
"Okay just hang on a sec," the Webmaster said. "You'll have your new name in no time," the Webmaster pushed his feet against the floor and span to his desk, he started typing at his keyboard, brought up the source code to the site and began to change Swishs name. " Okay Namostar hope you like the new name," the Webmaster exclaimed.
"Thanks for that Webmaster. Now Shockys just got to decide on his new name and we can get out of this hell hole...I mean tech heaven," Namostar replied, " well what do you want your new name to be then?"
"Hmmm I am not sure either......how about...."
_______________
You decide Shocky. Sorry about the shortness of this part. I only got to write it in the morning at school. Now they nearly have their new names the action can start. Think of it as a long intro.....
(;o|
"Why should I do it. Your the Shocktrooper and as I have heard thr webmaster can get angry so I think that you should do it Shocky," replied Swish.
"Fine then I'll do it," Shocky said in an annoyed voice. Shocky slowly shuffled up to the door. Raising his hand he prepared to knock. BANG! the door flew open and came off its hinges........
"Have you got my GBA!..... oh your not the postman are you? You'd think that I'd already have one seeing as I work for SR wouldn't you? Anyway I suppose that you'd better come in," said the Webmaster, which to be honest was in some freaky sounding voice. The three of them hesitated...., " I said COME IN!" shouted the Webmaster.
"Okay, okay. Dont get your HTML in a twist," replied Swish in a cocky voice. Slowly Spider, Swish and Shocky entered the Webmasters office. All three looked at each in amazement as they saw the contents of the office.
"Dont look at each other like that, I have everything I need for my job. A god old Pc and a huge lightening quick....36k modem. Hmm I see what you mean now. Anyway what are you here for?"
"No wonder it takes him ages to update the site," Spider muttered under his breath.
"What was that Spider?" the Webmaster asked.
"I said Swish and Shocky need to change their names. Can you help them?" replied Spider.
"Of course I can. They dont call me the Webmaster for nothing. Okay so what do you want your new names to be then.....?" the Webmaster asked.
"Hmmm I am not sure really haven't had much time to think about it. Well I'll be called...Namostar... yeah. Namostar," Swish decided.
"Okay just hang on a sec," the Webmaster said. "You'll have your new name in no time," the Webmaster pushed his feet against the floor and span to his desk, he started typing at his keyboard, brought up the source code to the site and began to change Swishs name. " Okay Namostar hope you like the new name," the Webmaster exclaimed.
"Thanks for that Webmaster. Now Shockys just got to decide on his new name and we can get out of this hell hole...I mean tech heaven," Namostar replied, " well what do you want your new name to be then?"
"Hmmm I am not sure either......how about...."
_______________
You decide Shocky. Sorry about the shortness of this part. I only got to write it in the morning at school. Now they nearly have their new names the action can start. Think of it as a long intro.....
(;o|
Man that feels good (no rude remarks about that by the way). The two main characters you shocky, and Swish have now read the first part of the story. I should be able to update it tommorrow if I write a bit tonight a bit in registration at school and a bit tommorrow after school. I really want to be able to update it tommorrow but if I dont expect a much longer second part.
Original and inventive, well done Nebby!
And i'm just proud that you included me in it.
Keep updating Nebby.
It's looks promising.
And i'm just proud that you included me in it.
Keep updating Nebby.
It's looks promising.
Reeeeeaaaaaaaadddddd iiiiiittttttttt read it read it read it Reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaadddddddd iiiiiiiiiittttttttt. Would someone please read it. Remember it is short because it will be updated most days for the next ... I dont know how long.
Anyone who was waiting for the next part, I'm afraid it won't be updated until tommorrow. I have been to busy today.
(;o(
(;o(
Swish wrote:
> Cool! Finally I'm in a story - and its good!
I thought that it was good to...until I read it. LOL. No I suppose its okay. I should be able to do the next part for tommorrow. I dont know how many parts it will have but there should be quite a few.
Looking forward to
> tommorrows edition Neb!
So am I. Just need to work out a good story. It is going to be confusing talking about time travel as like in games you can forget who some characters are and whever they are from the P/P/F
Looks like I'd best do my own one too!
You should it is actually quite fun. Dont be dissapointed if it isn't as long as you like it too be. I was with this but I am just going to keep going and progress the story. REmember its quality not quantity that matters. Although in my eyes (not yours) Dave the tramps story didn't really show this.
> Cool! Finally I'm in a story - and its good!
I thought that it was good to...until I read it. LOL. No I suppose its okay. I should be able to do the next part for tommorrow. I dont know how many parts it will have but there should be quite a few.
Looking forward to
> tommorrows edition Neb!
So am I. Just need to work out a good story. It is going to be confusing talking about time travel as like in games you can forget who some characters are and whever they are from the P/P/F
Looks like I'd best do my own one too!
You should it is actually quite fun. Dont be dissapointed if it isn't as long as you like it too be. I was with this but I am just going to keep going and progress the story. REmember its quality not quantity that matters. Although in my eyes (not yours) Dave the tramps story didn't really show this.
"It'll never work," screamed Swish.
"its the only way. We've got to try," replied Shocky in a much calmer manner. "MJs life is in our hands, so it's either now or never".
"NOW!!!," both of them shouted. With an almighty leap they bounded forward into the Time_Warp. In a blur of colour the duo were sucked back to a time just before the great battle of the FOG.
"OUCH!," complained Shocky as he landed on the concrete floor. Swish however was slightly luckier. He had, had a much softer landing...on top of Spider that is.
"Sorry Spider," apologised Swish as he clambered off of the mangled body of Spider. Almost as quickly as Spider had been knocked down he was back on his eight legs and Swish had noticed that he didn't look happy.
"I'm gonna kick the cra......oh its you Swish," Spider said. Swish looked very relieved as he knew that Spider was already angry with him because of him immitating him.
"Hang on a sec, thats not actually happened yet," Swish thought to himself. "Look Spider we have something to tell yuo and we are not sure if your going to believe us," Swish said.
"Well carry on then," Spider replied.
"The thing is Spider, we are Swish and Shocky it's just we are from the near future. Wait dont speak yet. You see we have come back to try and stop MJ dying," Shocky explained.
"MJs going to die....good. I never did like him, well I did but anyway thats another story. What has all of this got to do with me then. As you can see I dont really care what happens to M......," Spider gets inturrupted mid sentence.
"No Spider you dont seem to understand MJ does like you it's just he hasn't apologised yet," Swish tells Spider.
"Okay now I'm confused. Er....I guess I'm in though," Spider mumbles.
Spider Swish and Shocky begin the long walk to the spot where the battle of the FOG would soon take place. Before long Spider realises something very important, " by the way if you two aren't the Swish and Shocky from the present doesn't that mean that there is two Swishs and two Shockys walking around".
"Actually that is a very good point, we better go see the Webmaster and get our names changed before we go any further. Just imagine if we met the present day Swish and Shocky. The results would be catastrophic," Shocky says to Swish and Spider. So the three decide to take a slight detour and head off to the Webmasters office on Turbonutter Avenue.
Some time later........
"Wow this is the Webmasters office?" exclaims Shocky
"Yeah it is. Pretty amazing isn't it......" replies Spider.
"Amazingly cr@ppy that is"
To be continued (hopefully tommorrow)
**************
(;o|
"its the only way. We've got to try," replied Shocky in a much calmer manner. "MJs life is in our hands, so it's either now or never".
"NOW!!!," both of them shouted. With an almighty leap they bounded forward into the Time_Warp. In a blur of colour the duo were sucked back to a time just before the great battle of the FOG.
"OUCH!," complained Shocky as he landed on the concrete floor. Swish however was slightly luckier. He had, had a much softer landing...on top of Spider that is.
"Sorry Spider," apologised Swish as he clambered off of the mangled body of Spider. Almost as quickly as Spider had been knocked down he was back on his eight legs and Swish had noticed that he didn't look happy.
"I'm gonna kick the cra......oh its you Swish," Spider said. Swish looked very relieved as he knew that Spider was already angry with him because of him immitating him.
"Hang on a sec, thats not actually happened yet," Swish thought to himself. "Look Spider we have something to tell yuo and we are not sure if your going to believe us," Swish said.
"Well carry on then," Spider replied.
"The thing is Spider, we are Swish and Shocky it's just we are from the near future. Wait dont speak yet. You see we have come back to try and stop MJ dying," Shocky explained.
"MJs going to die....good. I never did like him, well I did but anyway thats another story. What has all of this got to do with me then. As you can see I dont really care what happens to M......," Spider gets inturrupted mid sentence.
"No Spider you dont seem to understand MJ does like you it's just he hasn't apologised yet," Swish tells Spider.
"Okay now I'm confused. Er....I guess I'm in though," Spider mumbles.
Spider Swish and Shocky begin the long walk to the spot where the battle of the FOG would soon take place. Before long Spider realises something very important, " by the way if you two aren't the Swish and Shocky from the present doesn't that mean that there is two Swishs and two Shockys walking around".
"Actually that is a very good point, we better go see the Webmaster and get our names changed before we go any further. Just imagine if we met the present day Swish and Shocky. The results would be catastrophic," Shocky says to Swish and Spider. So the three decide to take a slight detour and head off to the Webmasters office on Turbonutter Avenue.
Some time later........
"Wow this is the Webmasters office?" exclaims Shocky
"Yeah it is. Pretty amazing isn't it......" replies Spider.
"Amazingly cr@ppy that is"
To be continued (hopefully tommorrow)
**************
(;o|
Page: