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I really liked his stories, all the cliffhangers and stuff. Plus it's nothing but action! There's always people dying and getting chased!
They seem to remind me of that girl on American Pie. "I shot him but he shot me back and we shot together it was really funny I like shooting."
They seem to remind me of that girl on American Pie. "I shot him but he shot me back and we shot together it was really funny I like shooting."
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I love it all.
I loved his raw stories but he actually IS improving. Read part 1 then 11 and you will see a dramatic difference.
Well yeah, that's what happens with practice. I'm sure in 5 years time he'll finally understands that our previous posts wer really mocking his stories; but by then, his scripts would actually be good, and stickmen comics rather professional looking.
Maybe.
Maybe.
Ok then cool!
Crossbob, do you know how many parts there will be to The Finding?
As many as I want how many do you think there should be?
how many Parts do you think there should be of the finding?
20 is a nice round number but however many you choose to do, make sure the ending is the best thing I've ever read. I want blood, guns, bad grammar and slow motion.
Don't forget the slow motion.
"then every thin went slo-mo"
classic
classic
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