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They seem to remind me of that girl on American Pie. "I shot him but he shot me back and we shot together it was really funny I like shooting."
Spend more than 5 minutes thinking about what story you are going to tell and how the best way to put it across to people would be. read a book or two on writing and maybe visit a proper writing forum and submit what ever you think is your best piece and get some feedback, but for gods sake listen to what they say as you don’t seem to listen to anyone on here.
Try to improve and get a style of your own and then post a story on here so that people will genuinely think, 'Wow crossbobs stories are a lot better'.