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"Poetry corner"

The idea behind this place is that instead of starting your own thread with one poem they can all go in here instead.
Here is then, a place for your all your word's of beauty, anger, love, disappointment and anything else you care to add.

I did think it were a bit strange myself...

Having evaluated those lyrics, they are seriously dodgy.

Um...didn't mean to re-post that :S

It was a ba**ard to translate so i had to change it.

http://babelfish.altavista.com/babelfish/tr

:D

I appologise if this doesnt make any sense.
Editing was needed

ye oldie man had a ye oldie vanUPDATED!

there was an old man,
he sat proudly in his pink van,
the engine started to splutter,
the old man gave it some cremey butter,
the van went crazy,
as the old man became lazy,
the van spoke,
the old man awoke,
the van cried "i want somebody to talk to me, i need somebody
near me"
the old man stared at the van in fear!
the van screamed at the old man!
he was angry his van had gone mad!
the van chuckled and laughed at the bewildered old man
the man was confused dazled and surprised,
he thought long and hard he felt sad and weakened "if i dies will you cries?" he asked,
the van did not reply but gave a small sigh.
he rummaged around the ye oldie van in search for a gun, but what he
got was nothing but FUN!
the van started to rock,
the doors slammed and locked,
the old man was excited the dark van had its surprises,
the man lit a candle to see the secret match,
but all he saw was a pile of burning thatch.

rule to all : don't get to old

Flockhart wrote:
> You know i've also got red hair.......

Don't push it. lol

I know i go on about structure and rhyme and flow but when it comes down to it, if it's honest, beautiful and readable then that's all you could ask for.
Well done Mr Edgy

that is... damn sweet.

Go for it edgy you gettin there arent you!