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"Poetry corner"

The idea behind this place is that instead of starting your own thread with one poem they can all go in here instead.
Here is then, a place for your all your word's of beauty, anger, love, disappointment and anything else you care to add.

I love you too Flockhart :P


I've gone for something different this time. So if it's crap, let me know :)

Sit and Stare

In a time when I was younger,
I used to sit and stare.
I imagined a whole life in which we would share,
As I sat and stared.
In this life we had such fun.
We never worried, never wanted.
But would I pluck up the courage to make it happen?
No.
I just used to sit and stare.

Where would we live? Where would we go?
I did not care as I sat and stared.
What movies would we watch, what jokes would we share?
I did not care as I sat and stared.
I just wanted to spend my life with you,
But I didn’t have a chance did I.
I just sat and stared.

I loved your smile, and those eyes that shone.
They shone a ray of happiness that brightened my day.
I loved to hear you laugh, like a window into the future that would never be.
I loved the way you walked and the way you joked with me.
But it didn’t last, it couldn’t.
Because I sat and stared.

Who am I kidding, I wouldn’t have stood a chance,
But would have given so much just for one.
I was young, stupid and didn’t have a clue,
And I probably wouldn’t have been the one for you.
But now I’ll never know, I never even tried,
I never even commented on your lovely hair.
So I am the fool, I can’t complain,
I just wish I didn’t sit and stare.

You know i've also got red hair.......

The cheek !

:)

Sorry - wasn't meant to make you feel sad/jealous or anything like that.

I wrote what came into my head - and probably secured my rejection stamp in my passport if I flew to the same state she's in.

If it helps, she's just a fantasy. It's the real girls I prefer and although I've only seen one pic, you've got gorgeous red hair :)

Did I forget to mention you're gorgeous?

<hopes he's back in the good books and doesn't get hatemail :)>

Edgy wrote:
> Gorgeous Red Hair
>
> Oh how I long to have you here,
> To hold you in my arms.
> I’m sure I’d be able to win your heart,
> If I show you my sweet charm.
>
> I love everything about you,
> From your gorgeous reddish hair,
> To you eyes and that great smile of yours.
> For you I really care.
>
> I wish that things were different,
> I’ve tried to convince the powers that be.
> I wish you weren’t with that lucky guy,
> But instead you were with me.
>
> If only things were different,
> Our lives would be such fun.
> I’d give you all that I can give.
> Girl with gorgeous red hair
> My goddess Claire


O my gosh.. thankyou so much :'(

ye oldie man had a ye oldie van

there was an old man,
he sat proudly in his pink van,
the engine started to splutter,
the old man gave it some cremey butter,
the van went crazy,
as the old man became lazy,
the van spoke,
the old man awoke,
the van cried "i want somebody to talk to me, i need somebody near me"
but what happened next was to make the old man feel young again!
the van screamed at the old man alerting all people nearby.
the peolple were angry it was worse then a killer fly!
the van was annoyed the van hummed a noisey noise,
the old man woke up and cryeid for his van had gone crazy he thought long and hard and realised there was only one way to make a crazy van lazy.
he rummaged around the ye oldie van in search for a gun, but what he got was nothing but FUN!
the van started to rock,
the doors slammed and locked,
the old man was excited the dark van had its surprises,
the man lit a candle to see the secret match,
but all he saw was a pile of burning thatch.

rule to all : don't get to old

Onwards ?

Here i go
Again
Taking apart what i am
Again
Losing what i am
Again
When nothing has really changed

I can't seem to find my soul
Again
Misplaced in a moment of joy
When
Carelessly i let it show
Then
It ran off into the night

How many times can this happen
Again
How many times will it flatten
Again
Taken apart by myself
When
Nothing is really wrong

This topic get's better every day.

Another from me.

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Hating You

I hate the way you strut along,
I hate the way you hum a song.
I hate the way you flick your hair,
I hate the way in which you stare.
I hate the way you think you’re cool,
I hate the way you act at school.
I hate the way you laugh and joke,
I hate the way you used to smoke.
I hate the way you’re afraid of dirt,
I hate the way you always flirt.
I hate the way everyone loves you,
But I shouldn’t complain, I do too.

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Went for a more repetitive one this time.

Heh an Avid Merrion poem with a posh BO' SELECTA at the end. :D