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"Short Story: Freedom"

Okay, I'll put it in the second post as it's too long to have to scroll down every time. This one took me a very long time, and I hope it was worth it.

I would really appreciate it if you did just read it. I don't care how long it takes-whether you read it on the day it was posted, or whether you finally manage to finish it a month after it's posted, I don't mind. If you could just reply to it with some feedback, perhaps what you liked about the story and what you didn't, then I'd really appreciate it.

Finally, I hope you enjoy it. Those of you who have read my previous ones will know I'm based towards more of a comedy, or sci-fi type of story. This one is much more serious, and I'm not sure if it will work or not. I hope it does.

Once again I thank everyone on these forums for letting me post my stories on here, and I thank everyone who reads them, as you've taken some time out of your life to do it.

Please don't reply to this until I've posted the actual story. Thanks, Ant.

POP for Semajal!

Pah, take your time to write your own story... but won't bother writing a story WITH US, will you?

Bah, no respect, that's what, I tells ya... :0)

Pop to the TOP for DeltaJava! {:)

This deserves more than this...so I guess its time for one of my old faourite catchphrases........

POPAROONI!

I got caught trying to recover notes on where the brain-chips are stored...

All because I had to play with those retarded chipped guards.

Using radio signals to make them urinate on Grix's shrine was great fun until a receptor picked up a signal and set off the alarm...

Guess I got too careless...

(Great story!) :-)

VenomByte wrote:
> Very good Ant. If my coursework is handed in late because I've been reading
> this, you're for the high jump ;)

Bah, my stories are more important than coursework. ;)

Twain wrote:

Dunno, i just find the idea of RBS in a cell funny!

Stop digging your hole deeper. It wasn't even RBS in a cell you muppet, it was Strafex....lazy, tut tut.

Great story Ant!
*looks at clock then falls asleep*

Very good Ant. If my coursework is handed in late because I've been reading this, you're for the high jump ;)

Ant wrote:
> Twain wrote:
> > He quickly sat up, rubbed his sleep-filled eyes, and
>
> squinted
> through the darkness to see who was opening his
> cell

>hahahahaha! lol!

Erm...can I ask, what was funny about that?


Dunno, i just find the idea of RBS in a cell funny!