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Sun 09/01/05 at 16:22
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With my eyes shining with happiness I jumped though the glass roof and dropped. To the floor I looked no one was here not even a guard. I ran down the corridor. Blood of death ran though me I dripped tears from my eyes I had to cheer up I was robbing a Jewellers for God sake. A heard some one walking and hid round the corner. There was a man standing there I pulled out my knife and ran at him I to try my sealth move that Oldman Bob had taught me. I ran at the man grabbed him at the neck at cut his throat his throat he dropped to the floor. Someone was close behind I ran into the diamond room the diamonds shone the light of god all got my bag and smashed open a glass case. I ripped out all the diamonds and threw them into my bag. I grabbed every diamond in that room and put it in to my bag. I jumped up all to a ledge and ran towards a glass window I smashed though the glass window I was flying down to the floor as pieces of glass hit me. I fell to the floor and rolled over. I looked in my bag the diamonds were ok.

I ran down a alleyway and jumped over a wall. My motorbike was parked outside a jumped on it and revved it up. I heard someone coming it was a guard he raised the alarm I sped down the road and saw him run round the corner he jumped into a car he was coming after me. I skided round corner the blood of death still ran though me. I went up a ramp and heard the car coming up behind me. I flipped though the air on the bike and landed down on the road. The man in the car started shouting at me he was telling me to stopped but I had to get these diamonds back to Billy. Billy was a gangster who wanted the diamonds and I wanted money for those diamonds. I got my gun and started to shoot back at the car. I just wanted to live and not die. One bullet smashed the windscreen blood was dripping from my arm a piece of glass was stuck in it.

I had to get to billys place I went down a little road and the car had stopped following me I heard a siren the police were after me I had to lost them. I was coming to edge I would have to ride off there. I sped up the bike and everything went in to slow-mo. I went off the edge I was falling down the bike was falling. The air blew against my face and the bike fell to the floor sparks flew up in the air. I saw the police car coming towards me it was upside down. I step on it and my bike flew forwards I was near Billys place. The police car slid behind me and nearly hit me. I saw the police officer get out the car and try to shoot me. I shot at the police officer and hit him straight in the head. He fell to the floor I couldn't belive it I had just killed a police officer I was going to be in deep trouble. I stopped at Billys place and walked in Billy came up to me and stanched the Diamonds off of me he ran for he didn't give me any money.

I shoot my gun at him and he fell to the floor. "No one steals from me I got them Diamonds and now im keeping these Diamonds and giving them to my wife because you know.... Diamonds are a womans best friend".....
Mon 10/01/05 at 21:17
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"0228"
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I just finished part 8 of The Finding. I can't believe that Jay has been left 'unconcuse'. Also the new story called Super Powers is brilliant. Part One:Running From A Dog Into The Future. Best title ever.
Mon 10/01/05 at 21:08
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Fabergé Gem wrote:
> No words can describe what I feel inside.

Was that accindental quoting?
Mon 10/01/05 at 21:03
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"For One Night Only"
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Finished it...

What a cliffhanger...
Mon 10/01/05 at 20:51
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good thank you what bit you read up to?
Mon 10/01/05 at 20:50
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"0228"
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Everybody likes The Finding.
Mon 10/01/05 at 20:46
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"Catch it!"
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Do you like the finding?
Mon 10/01/05 at 19:34
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"For One Night Only"
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Just read the entire "The Finding" series. Now I see what all the fuss is about. Everything went in slow-motion...
Mon 10/01/05 at 07:17
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"Laughingstock"
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No words can describe what I feel inside.
Sun 09/01/05 at 22:23
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"SOUP!"
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Goodness you're talented.
Sun 09/01/05 at 21:55
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I think you'll find that you're wrong. I wrote all of the stories involving Jay Tall and copywrited him. My lawyers will be in contact soon I hope you have a lot of money to pay me with otherwise I'll just repossess all your belongings.

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