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Hello everyone! Few of you probably remember who I am but I'm back. For now anyway and I'm taking this forum to strange new places...cough. I have decided after a very poor attempt myself to start a thread where we can all write and show our songs and get feedback from other members. I know for a fact that some of you are in bands and I also think this will be a good outlet for people wanting to do something creative but a bit different. In other words, if you're sick of writing poems, stories or the occassional Hai-ku then try writing a song! And we'll tell you if it rocks.
Here's my first ever attempt (so be kind!) to start the thread of. Enjoy...or not.
COLD:
1)
Colder than the morning dew
I got up to see you
Feet are cold, late at night
You keep me warm, to fight the fight
Chorus
When I dream you're cold around me
When you're here I'm glad you found me
I'm so cold you, you keep me warm
Arms so strong, the cold is gone
2)
Dark as pitch, the droplets form
A reminder why you keep me warm
Hold you closer than before
Chilled to bone, all I want is more
Repeat Chorus
3)
Tears or rain? The look the same
I have the cold to blame,
But I'm closer than last time,
Hold your hand, grasp with mine,
I realise now, the cold's sublime
Repeat chorus 3 times and fade out
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Well there it is guys and girls, inspired by someone very special to me but I don't think it does them justice. Hope you enjoyed it, it's just a rough draft but if it gets this thread of the ground then I've done my job. Get commenting and creating my little web monkeys. Enjoy! :D
Here's my first ever attempt (so be kind!) to start the thread of. Enjoy...or not.
COLD:
1)
Colder than the morning dew
I got up to see you
Feet are cold, late at night
You keep me warm, to fight the fight
Chorus
When I dream you're cold around me
When you're here I'm glad you found me
I'm so cold you, you keep me warm
Arms so strong, the cold is gone
2)
Dark as pitch, the droplets form
A reminder why you keep me warm
Hold you closer than before
Chilled to bone, all I want is more
Repeat Chorus
3)
Tears or rain? The look the same
I have the cold to blame,
But I'm closer than last time,
Hold your hand, grasp with mine,
I realise now, the cold's sublime
Repeat chorus 3 times and fade out
----------------------
Well there it is guys and girls, inspired by someone very special to me but I don't think it does them justice. Hope you enjoyed it, it's just a rough draft but if it gets this thread of the ground then I've done my job. Get commenting and creating my little web monkeys. Enjoy! :D
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Strange idea.... ..But I like it......
Strange idea.... ..But I like it......
Haha, the lyrics make me weep real tears of laughter.
And other liquids.
Also of laughter.
And other liquids.
Also of laughter.
Hello everyone! Few of you probably remember who I am but I'm back. For now anyway and I'm taking this forum to strange new places...cough. I have decided after a very poor attempt myself to start a thread where we can all write and show our songs and get feedback from other members. I know for a fact that some of you are in bands and I also think this will be a good outlet for people wanting to do something creative but a bit different. In other words, if you're sick of writing poems, stories or the occassional Hai-ku then try writing a song! And we'll tell you if it rocks.
Here's my first ever attempt (so be kind!) to start the thread of. Enjoy...or not.
COLD:
1)
Colder than the morning dew
I got up to see you
Feet are cold, late at night
You keep me warm, to fight the fight
Chorus
When I dream you're cold around me
When you're here I'm glad you found me
I'm so cold you, you keep me warm
Arms so strong, the cold is gone
2)
Dark as pitch, the droplets form
A reminder why you keep me warm
Hold you closer than before
Chilled to bone, all I want is more
Repeat Chorus
3)
Tears or rain? The look the same
I have the cold to blame,
But I'm closer than last time,
Hold your hand, grasp with mine,
I realise now, the cold's sublime
Repeat chorus 3 times and fade out
----------------------
Well there it is guys and girls, inspired by someone very special to me but I don't think it does them justice. Hope you enjoyed it, it's just a rough draft but if it gets this thread of the ground then I've done my job. Get commenting and creating my little web monkeys. Enjoy! :D
Here's my first ever attempt (so be kind!) to start the thread of. Enjoy...or not.
COLD:
1)
Colder than the morning dew
I got up to see you
Feet are cold, late at night
You keep me warm, to fight the fight
Chorus
When I dream you're cold around me
When you're here I'm glad you found me
I'm so cold you, you keep me warm
Arms so strong, the cold is gone
2)
Dark as pitch, the droplets form
A reminder why you keep me warm
Hold you closer than before
Chilled to bone, all I want is more
Repeat Chorus
3)
Tears or rain? The look the same
I have the cold to blame,
But I'm closer than last time,
Hold your hand, grasp with mine,
I realise now, the cold's sublime
Repeat chorus 3 times and fade out
----------------------
Well there it is guys and girls, inspired by someone very special to me but I don't think it does them justice. Hope you enjoyed it, it's just a rough draft but if it gets this thread of the ground then I've done my job. Get commenting and creating my little web monkeys. Enjoy! :D
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