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"Short Story Competition 6"

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Mon 14/06/04 at 21:05
"period drama"
Posts: 19,792
... about time ...

Anywho, with much apologies, the next topic title shall be:

Dust and Flame

Okay? Not too restictive, I hope.
I feel like a really crap teacher up here - but you must obey!

yeah

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Rules:

1) Put SSC6 in front of your entry, followed by the punctuation of your choice (a dash? or will it be .... a colon? the semi? who knows ... ) then your title. Call it what you will.

2) No word limit. Chances are that if I don't finish reading something, it wouldn't win anyway. Ahar

3) The closing date is Friday the 2nd of July - that's almost almost 3 weeks.

[and max. 2 entries per person]

Gogogogogogogogogogogogogo.
moo


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*drum roll*

WINNURZ!

3rd Place

Grix [URL]http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php?threadid=104374&forumid=423[/URL]

Wonderfully innocent but haunting piece, simple style hiding something more complex. A great read.

2nd Place

Rickoss [URL]http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php?threadid=104459&forumid=423¤tsort=desc[/URL]

Fantastic atmosphere and descriptions, stuck in the mind, tugged at the soul.

1st Place

Cyclone [URL]http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php?threadid=103955&forumid=423[/URL]

Bloody fantastic descriptions (some of the best) at start and end. Slightly lagging in the middle, but a well-deserved win for an epic story.

Special Mentions:

Every single other person who entered..
I was very impressed at the quality of entires (*snigger*) - there's not a single story I wouldn't read again. Tough judging.
Tue 15/06/04 at 09:42
Regular
Posts: 10,437
Hmmm.... I was gonna b***er off for a bit, but I may stay for this. Lovely.

Blame FFF.
Tue 15/06/04 at 11:00
Regular
"Digging!"
Posts: 1,560
OH, SSC5 finished? Damn, I had started an entry for that, i though it finished on the 21st, ah well...
Tue 15/06/04 at 11:35
Regular
"QPR 1974"
Posts: 2,539
I say you move the closing date forward.
Tue 15/06/04 at 14:05
Regular
"gsybe you!"
Posts: 18,825
Nice topic.

Excellent.
Tue 15/06/04 at 16:00
Regular
"bei-jing-jing-jing"
Posts: 7,403
Allred wrote:
> OH, SSC5 finished? Damn, I had started an entry for that, i though it
> finished on the 21st, ah well...

Yeah, unfortunately BG moved the date forward a week, blame his impatience. You can still post it though, and we'll give you feedback, you just won't be eligible for having it ranked.
Tue 15/06/04 at 16:54
Regular
Posts: 13,611
There should be a rule that nobody can die...
Tue 15/06/04 at 16:57
Regular
"bei-jing-jing-jing"
Posts: 7,403
...erm?
Tue 15/06/04 at 17:05
Regular
"eat toast!"
Posts: 1,466
but violence makes stories so much better! a love tale can't be complete without a rival lover and the current lover having a showdown (Whilst the person at the same time going out with a third lover) or maybe a DIY dad fighting off another dad whos seeking revenge for his lost drill and hammer.
Tue 15/06/04 at 17:06
"LOLLERSKATES!"
Posts: 5,659
Dust and flame, eh? what, do you have to right about a "dust and flame", or does it just have to appear in the story?
Tue 15/06/04 at 17:08
Regular
"bei-jing-jing-jing"
Posts: 7,403
Its got to appear in the story, and as much as possible.

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