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"Poetry corner"

The idea behind this place is that instead of starting your own thread with one poem they can all go in here instead.
Here is then, a place for your all your word's of beauty, anger, love, disappointment and anything else you care to add.

Oh, yep. Definately improved.. o_O

I personally can't wait until Flockhart sees all the lovely poems we've lovingly written for him.

I'm definitely going to have to go for 'improved'.

Ruined?

We improved it, minion.

You ladies went and ruined this thread now, didn't you? tutut.

Then in this, I feel success.
My orignal intentions were to emphasise the inadvertent pleasure felt through an original pleasure - the pleasure or larfter.
I thank you for your praising analysis.

Azul, I feel your poem about Sunny D is extremely successful in portraying both the sadness and loss associated with that event in my life along with the enjoyment it provided.

I feel that you beautifully sum up the excitement of the moment in the lines:
"But then choked
and larfed"
You have expressed wonderfully the orgasmic pleasure I felt while excreting and how it can cause choking and hilarity at that crucial moment, especially when combined with a drink of the calibre of Sunny D.

Teh Rockage

Page
am teh rockage

The Zepp
am teh rockage

Floyd
are teh rockage

and my milk moustache
am teh rockage

Teh Suckage

Your eyes
are teh suckage

Your ears
are teh suckage

I hammerslide quickly
but it's teh suckage

Morello
is teh suckage

And the hammerslide evapourise phaser slider tremolo hand slide bar
is teh suckage

Through the Nose

I paid through
the nose
for my magic Sunny D

But then choked
and larfed

The delight I felt
twas arousing
as my nose

Distributed.

The Sunny D
It flew
through nostril hair
alike

And splooshed.