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"Poetry corner"

The idea behind this place is that instead of starting your own thread with one poem they can all go in here instead.
Here is then, a place for your all your word's of beauty, anger, love, disappointment and anything else you care to add.

I will probably get a kicked ass as I posted this elsewhere already but you guys are cool and I havent posted in here for a while *AND* i would like your opinions

sorry in advance :P

Manic McGee
Three miles south
Of a huge oak tree
A tatty young squirrel
Goes by the name of McGee

Was chasing and racing
A feather in the wind
He jumped up and caught it
To the floor it was pinned

A rebel of a rodent
A naughty little fiend
At doing chores and good things
He was so unkeen

His Nana squirrel
Would tut and mutter
Just a glimpse of the pest
Got her in a flutter

No cause could be captured
For the ways he so strayed
Watching the hard work of others
On the grass he laid

Oh, Why, Oh, Why
Mama squirrel would ask
Why won’t he do
Just a tiny task!

Such a naughty young fellow
They would say as he passed
As he took every hazelnut
And ran away fast

None of the others
Would be McGee’s friend
So McGee all alone
For himself he would fend

He would huff and puff
As he chewed on some straw
That wasn’t enough
He always wanted more

For such a mischievous squirrel
Goes by the name of McGee
Three miles south
Of a huge oak tree

That was fantastic flockhart

Could Be

You could be
The making of me
please love me if you have the time
Theres so much i can be
Build me up, set me free
Take me, Make me. Don't break me
Be mine

You could be
The love that i need
A love i could never define
Something new, something true
Something i see in you
Hold me, own me, i'm lonely
Be mine

You should be
The other half to me
Together we would be divine
Without, i'm so blue
I only want you
Be there, be fair, just care and
Be mine

Ashman wrote:
> It was great, except in this paragraph double rhyming "be"
> doesn't really work.

Just for the record, I actually wrote it in less than a minute :)

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I lied. :D

davyboy wrote:
> Yer maybe but thats why it only won a bronze but pratice makes
> perfect as they say

What the hell do you keep going on about "bronze" for?

Ashman wrote:
> It was great, except in this paragraph double rhyming "be"
> doesn't really work.
>
> There is nowhere you cannot go,
> Nothing you cannot be,
> "Impossible" is not a word,
> Unless you want it to be.
>
> Perhaps change it for "Belief is the one true key" or
> something different that rhymes with "be".

Yer maybe but thats why it only won a bronze but pratice makes perfect as they say

It was great, except in this paragraph double rhyming "be" doesn't really work.

> There is nowhere you cannot go,
> Nothing you cannot be,
> "Impossible" is not a word,
> Unless you want it to be.

Perhaps change it for "Belief is the one true key" or something different that rhymes with "be".

There Is a Place

There is a Place, with in a place, and a time, with no end.
A place where there is light, place where there is Dark.
A dream within Dreams, where no person can go.
A place that is safe, free from harm.
A place where you fall and then rise then rise above the clouds.
A place where secrets are within a secret of a hidden memory
A place where you can love someone, so far away.
You see their smiling face, so bright and radiant.
You see the stars, the rivers, the trees, the woods.
You’re drowning, your floating, and your swimming.
You meet within a field, you run like the wind.
You feel so safe and warm, with the sun beating down.
You feel free from life that you can not see.
You can almost touch her she feels so real.
You see the twinkle in her eyes, like the stars above.
You her hear voice though it is so far away.
Will you get married, will you raise children.
Is everything possible? Is nothing possible?
Questions, questions that go unanswered.
I see the light from with in, I love who ever you are.
But it is our little secret and no one will know.

By Davyboy

;-)