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I don't know why I did what I did.
Something just came over me. Like an instinct; as natural as hunger. I found myself walking. It's like I was watching over a zombie. I felt like i had escaped, like I was a soul. I walked and I walked for miles on end. I didn't know where I was going. Everywhere I passed was new to me. But no one was out. It was like time itself had stopped and I was the only person there, trapped in my mind while my body carried me off.
Then I got there. A tingle shot up my spine. A great feeling of fear, like no fear I'd ever had before came over me. I have no idea why though. All I saw before me was a house. It looked normal, yet my pulse was getting faster and faster. I slowly walked up to the door and turned the handle. It was open. I made my way downstairs to the cellar door. It was like I lived here. Like it was a routine. I turned the key in the cellar and pushed it open. I made a long creek like it hadn't been used for years.
Empty.
The room was empty.
It didn't seem right. I'd walked idly for hours. For this. Nothing. I walked into the middle of the room and felt something brush across my shoulder. Like I had walked into a web. I wanted to turn around, but I couldn't. I was frozen. My whole body became numb.
That's when it started. That's when the pain started. It was like nothing I'd ever experienced in this world. It was like my body was trying to rip itself in two. I couldn't scream. I was trapped. Then I saw it. A ghostly, transparent figure shot out of my body. Everything went black. Silence...
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This is a story that I've just started. Just wondered what you thought, what I could do with it ect.
Cheers
RiCkOsS
Something just came over me. Like an instinct; as natural as hunger. I found myself walking. It's like I was watching over a zombie. I felt like i had escaped, like I was a soul. I walked and I walked for miles on end. I didn't know where I was going. Everywhere I passed was new to me. But no one was out. It was like time itself had stopped and I was the only person there, trapped in my mind while my body carried me off.
Then I got there. A tingle shot up my spine. A great feeling of fear, like no fear I'd ever had before came over me. I have no idea why though. All I saw before me was a house. It looked normal, yet my pulse was getting faster and faster. I slowly walked up to the door and turned the handle. It was open. I made my way downstairs to the cellar door. It was like I lived here. Like it was a routine. I turned the key in the cellar and pushed it open. I made a long creek like it hadn't been used for years.
Empty.
The room was empty.
It didn't seem right. I'd walked idly for hours. For this. Nothing. I walked into the middle of the room and felt something brush across my shoulder. Like I had walked into a web. I wanted to turn around, but I couldn't. I was frozen. My whole body became numb.
That's when it started. That's when the pain started. It was like nothing I'd ever experienced in this world. It was like my body was trying to rip itself in two. I couldn't scream. I was trapped. Then I saw it. A ghostly, transparent figure shot out of my body. Everything went black. Silence...
****
This is a story that I've just started. Just wondered what you thought, what I could do with it ect.
Cheers
RiCkOsS
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I don't know why I did what I did.
Something just came over me. Like an instinct; as natural as hunger. I found myself walking. It's like I was watching over a zombie. I felt like i had escaped, like I was a soul. I walked and I walked for miles on end. I didn't know where I was going. Everywhere I passed was new to me. But no one was out. It was like time itself had stopped and I was the only person there, trapped in my mind while my body carried me off.
Then I got there. A tingle shot up my spine. A great feeling of fear, like no fear I'd ever had before came over me. I have no idea why though. All I saw before me was a house. It looked normal, yet my pulse was getting faster and faster. I slowly walked up to the door and turned the handle. It was open. I made my way downstairs to the cellar door. It was like I lived here. Like it was a routine. I turned the key in the cellar and pushed it open. I made a long creek like it hadn't been used for years.
Empty.
The room was empty.
It didn't seem right. I'd walked idly for hours. For this. Nothing. I walked into the middle of the room and felt something brush across my shoulder. Like I had walked into a web. I wanted to turn around, but I couldn't. I was frozen. My whole body became numb.
That's when it started. That's when the pain started. It was like nothing I'd ever experienced in this world. It was like my body was trying to rip itself in two. I couldn't scream. I was trapped. Then I saw it. A ghostly, transparent figure shot out of my body. Everything went black. Silence...
****
This is a story that I've just started. Just wondered what you thought, what I could do with it ect.
Cheers
RiCkOsS
Something just came over me. Like an instinct; as natural as hunger. I found myself walking. It's like I was watching over a zombie. I felt like i had escaped, like I was a soul. I walked and I walked for miles on end. I didn't know where I was going. Everywhere I passed was new to me. But no one was out. It was like time itself had stopped and I was the only person there, trapped in my mind while my body carried me off.
Then I got there. A tingle shot up my spine. A great feeling of fear, like no fear I'd ever had before came over me. I have no idea why though. All I saw before me was a house. It looked normal, yet my pulse was getting faster and faster. I slowly walked up to the door and turned the handle. It was open. I made my way downstairs to the cellar door. It was like I lived here. Like it was a routine. I turned the key in the cellar and pushed it open. I made a long creek like it hadn't been used for years.
Empty.
The room was empty.
It didn't seem right. I'd walked idly for hours. For this. Nothing. I walked into the middle of the room and felt something brush across my shoulder. Like I had walked into a web. I wanted to turn around, but I couldn't. I was frozen. My whole body became numb.
That's when it started. That's when the pain started. It was like nothing I'd ever experienced in this world. It was like my body was trying to rip itself in two. I couldn't scream. I was trapped. Then I saw it. A ghostly, transparent figure shot out of my body. Everything went black. Silence...
****
This is a story that I've just started. Just wondered what you thought, what I could do with it ect.
Cheers
RiCkOsS
Page: