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A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
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What the....this makes no sense, it starts off in 3rd person:
Liquid H²O wrote:
> A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
And finishes in 1st person...
> But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
I don't care if this isn't serious - bad punctuation is no joke.
Liquid H²O wrote:
> A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
And finishes in 1st person...
> But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
I don't care if this isn't serious - bad punctuation is no joke.
phillip, the "gad please" was probably a "JOKE". Look the word up
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liquid your the one aren't you ?!
Liquid H²O wrote:
> The End – GAD please.
Sorry, I just found that funny...
Just reminds me of something that alexj17 would write, a pathetic little post and expect to win a GAD...
Nice way to finish it off!
P.S You need to work on the rhymes!
> The End – GAD please.
Sorry, I just found that funny...
Just reminds me of something that alexj17 would write, a pathetic little post and expect to win a GAD...
Nice way to finish it off!
P.S You need to work on the rhymes!
A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
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