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A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
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A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
When all of a sudden there was a shriek near his head.
He looked for Peach but the coast was clear,
Maybe she had disappeared.
I asked Luigi just what he thought,
He said, I bet it was Bowser, you know his sort.
Later that day, I went to Bowser’s Lair,
Only to find she wasn’t there.
It didn’t seem right, where could she be,
Maybe, there was someone who was trying to get at me.
I returned home after hours of searching,
Little did I know what was lurking?
Still no Peach, and now I was lost,
But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
The End – GAD please.
Liquid H²O wrote:
> The End – GAD please.
Sorry, I just found that funny...
Just reminds me of something that alexj17 would write, a pathetic little post and expect to win a GAD...
Nice way to finish it off!
P.S You need to work on the rhymes!
> The End – GAD please.
Sorry, I just found that funny...
Just reminds me of something that alexj17 would write, a pathetic little post and expect to win a GAD...
Nice way to finish it off!
P.S You need to work on the rhymes!
liquid your the one aren't you ?!
phillip, the "gad please" was probably a "JOKE". Look the word up
Sonic
Sonic
What the....this makes no sense, it starts off in 3rd person:
Liquid H²O wrote:
> A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
And finishes in 1st person...
> But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
I don't care if this isn't serious - bad punctuation is no joke.
Liquid H²O wrote:
> A plumber called Mario, was asleep in his bed,
And finishes in 1st person...
> But then, at that moment, I was hit with some frost.
I don't care if this isn't serious - bad punctuation is no joke.
mikelar10 wrote:
> I don't care if this isn't serious - bad punctuation is no joke.
Jesus, you talk about it like it's a life threatning disease.
> I don't care if this isn't serious - bad punctuation is no joke.
Jesus, you talk about it like it's a life threatning disease.
Maybe it should go a little like this...
Mario, he's one cruel dude,
Kept a monkey in a cage and treated it rude.
The monkey escaped, demanded satisfaction.
Needs to save the girl, time for Jumpman Action.
So Mario, he did his best,
defeated Donkey Kong, with his hairy chest.
Princess Pauline, was as happy as can be,
til Mario had a fling with Daisy.
It was wierd action in a Mario land,
travlelling through space, skies, water and land.
At the end of the day, he'd had quite enough,
that adventure was easy, made Luigi look tough!
Princess Daisy was no big loss,
This Mario dude found out she didn't floss.
He was after someone cuter, who wasn't a fool,
The girl in pink, Princess Peach Toadstool.
He tried and tried to keep her from harm,
But the King of the Koopa's grabbed her arm.
She was stuck in the castle, as Mario was told,
Another adventure in the Mario World.
Blue skies, few clouds, but many a star,
through wonderous lands he travelled far.
Goombas and Koopas, and creatures delight,
Mario would never fall to Bowser's might!
He tried and tried, but constantly failed,
Everywhere he took her, Mario trailed.
Soon the inevitable, a bloody battle,
Toad was always around to tell and tattle.
He saved the girl, Princess Peach,
Is there nothing more that I can teach?
Of course there is, there are loads more adventures,
That would make ole Wrinkly Kong forget his dentures.
A long time ago, far away,
With Wario, Mario and Luigi would play,
Until things got nasty they didn't get along.
Mario treated him like Donkey Kong!
Bullied and misguided, vengeful at heart,
Mario's new castle would be a good place to start.
Stealing and looting, and having some fun,
Until Mario, the castle he won.
It wasn't until Super Mario Land 3,
that Mario, again became the enemy.
Wario was a good guy inside,
Wasn't his fault he was bullied as a child.
He decided to play it fair and square,
built up his strength to defeat him there,
In his castle, though Mario would flee
In a helicoptor above the trees.
Mario has been around for much more,
Golf and Tennis, Karting galore.
Though the game so far, filled us with so much glee
Is Super Smash Brothers, don't forget the Melee.
That's it for now, but don't think it's all over,
For Mario will be back in another.
He's been around for far too long,
so stick around and replay this song.
Marioooooo!
Mario, he's one cruel dude,
Kept a monkey in a cage and treated it rude.
The monkey escaped, demanded satisfaction.
Needs to save the girl, time for Jumpman Action.
So Mario, he did his best,
defeated Donkey Kong, with his hairy chest.
Princess Pauline, was as happy as can be,
til Mario had a fling with Daisy.
It was wierd action in a Mario land,
travlelling through space, skies, water and land.
At the end of the day, he'd had quite enough,
that adventure was easy, made Luigi look tough!
Princess Daisy was no big loss,
This Mario dude found out she didn't floss.
He was after someone cuter, who wasn't a fool,
The girl in pink, Princess Peach Toadstool.
He tried and tried to keep her from harm,
But the King of the Koopa's grabbed her arm.
She was stuck in the castle, as Mario was told,
Another adventure in the Mario World.
Blue skies, few clouds, but many a star,
through wonderous lands he travelled far.
Goombas and Koopas, and creatures delight,
Mario would never fall to Bowser's might!
He tried and tried, but constantly failed,
Everywhere he took her, Mario trailed.
Soon the inevitable, a bloody battle,
Toad was always around to tell and tattle.
He saved the girl, Princess Peach,
Is there nothing more that I can teach?
Of course there is, there are loads more adventures,
That would make ole Wrinkly Kong forget his dentures.
A long time ago, far away,
With Wario, Mario and Luigi would play,
Until things got nasty they didn't get along.
Mario treated him like Donkey Kong!
Bullied and misguided, vengeful at heart,
Mario's new castle would be a good place to start.
Stealing and looting, and having some fun,
Until Mario, the castle he won.
It wasn't until Super Mario Land 3,
that Mario, again became the enemy.
Wario was a good guy inside,
Wasn't his fault he was bullied as a child.
He decided to play it fair and square,
built up his strength to defeat him there,
In his castle, though Mario would flee
In a helicoptor above the trees.
Mario has been around for much more,
Golf and Tennis, Karting galore.
Though the game so far, filled us with so much glee
Is Super Smash Brothers, don't forget the Melee.
That's it for now, but don't think it's all over,
For Mario will be back in another.
He's been around for far too long,
so stick around and replay this song.
Marioooooo!
Uh-oh, it's a Nintendo Rhyme by Edgy.
It's probably gunna win!
It's probably gunna win!
Wasn't 'Mario's Story' the title of Paper Mario over in Japan??
Tiltawhirl wrote:
> Jesus, you talk about it like it's a life threatning disease.
Duohh, I thought it was...................................idiot.
> Jesus, you talk about it like it's a life threatning disease.
Duohh, I thought it was...................................idiot.
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