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"The Beat"

I wrote this poem and i didn't have time to finish it so here it is(it's not very good put i thought i'd post it anyway)

There once was a guy
His nickname was Domaye

He loved Nintendo
sr said hey prendo

They showed him a small purple box
And off he went to the docks

He got on the boat
Wrote a note
And attached it to his little yellow coat

On the note it said "to Japan
If you don’t I'll give your boat a ban
You don't know me but I can!"

The captain of ship was Len
He said to domaye pay me in yen
Domaye said no so he said it again

He said it again untill they were at the place
Domaye said “thanks you were ace
By the way I can’t pay you...in your face!”

He spent all his money on a Q

domaye wrote:
> I have an essay for tommorrow
> so Ibet I'll have to go

stop rhyming and is slim really on a choc bar wrapper?

I have an essay for tommorrow
so Ibet I'll have to go

I'm just saying a little rhyme
and everyone acts like it's a crime

Eminem acts like he's all that
when really hes just a prat

All he says is
slick a slick a slim shady
And all he does is
get sued by another lady

he sold him self out
hes not a rapper
he got paid 1 mil
to have his face
on a chocolate wrapper

domaye wrote:
> the bet was for THIRTY quid
> My little bros a bit dense
> Heck hes just a little kid
> and he doesn't know the difference between
> pounds or pence!
>
> As for my poem I know it's pretty c**p
> But hey isn't every rap?

appart from Eminem, yes.

the bet was for THIRTY quid
My little bros a bit dense
Heck hes just a little kid
and he doesn't know the difference between
pounds or pence!

As for my poem I know it's pretty c**p
But hey isn't every rap?

That was rubbish! no offence intended domaye.

you had a bet to rhyme on the net? how sad are you?!

If I stop rhyming I will lose my bet
The one with my bro
so i have to rhyme on the net

ok, stop with the rhyming now...

Many people say I am quite funny
And if I win game a day
I won't have to spend that much money