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I wrote this poem and i didn't have time to finish it so here it is(it's not very good put i thought i'd post it anyway)
There once was a guy
His nickname was Domaye
He loved Nintendo
sr said hey prendo
They showed him a small purple box
And off he went to the docks
He got on the boat
Wrote a note
And attached it to his little yellow coat
On the note it said "to Japan
If you don’t I'll give your boat a ban
You don't know me but I can!"
The captain of ship was Len
He said to domaye pay me in yen
Domaye said no so he said it again
He said it again untill they were at the place
Domaye said “thanks you were ace
By the way I can’t pay you...in your face!”
He spent all his money on a Q
There once was a guy
His nickname was Domaye
He loved Nintendo
sr said hey prendo
They showed him a small purple box
And off he went to the docks
He got on the boat
Wrote a note
And attached it to his little yellow coat
On the note it said "to Japan
If you don’t I'll give your boat a ban
You don't know me but I can!"
The captain of ship was Len
He said to domaye pay me in yen
Domaye said no so he said it again
He said it again untill they were at the place
Domaye said “thanks you were ace
By the way I can’t pay you...in your face!”
He spent all his money on a Q
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I wrote this poem and i didn't have time to finish it so here it is(it's not very good put i thought i'd post it anyway)
There once was a guy
His nickname was Domaye
He loved Nintendo
sr said hey prendo
They showed him a small purple box
And off he went to the docks
He got on the boat
Wrote a note
And attached it to his little yellow coat
On the note it said "to Japan
If you don’t I'll give your boat a ban
You don't know me but I can!"
The captain of ship was Len
He said to domaye pay me in yen
Domaye said no so he said it again
He said it again untill they were at the place
Domaye said “thanks you were ace
By the way I can’t pay you...in your face!”
He spent all his money on a Q
There once was a guy
His nickname was Domaye
He loved Nintendo
sr said hey prendo
They showed him a small purple box
And off he went to the docks
He got on the boat
Wrote a note
And attached it to his little yellow coat
On the note it said "to Japan
If you don’t I'll give your boat a ban
You don't know me but I can!"
The captain of ship was Len
He said to domaye pay me in yen
Domaye said no so he said it again
He said it again untill they were at the place
Domaye said “thanks you were ace
By the way I can’t pay you...in your face!”
He spent all his money on a Q
Hey Prendo!
Is good, I think though that you spent more time on rhyming than content. I still think its pretty good though :-)
Is good, I think though that you spent more time on rhyming than content. I still think its pretty good though :-)
It's not as easy as you think though,
after 2 mins of trying
you'll be hitting your head
and shouting out DOH!
after 2 mins of trying
you'll be hitting your head
and shouting out DOH!
domaye wrote:
> It's not as easy as you think though,
> after 2 mins of trying
> you'll be hitting your head
> and shouting out DOH!
tee hee. you even rhyume your replies! Im not critsising you, Im just saying what I thought. Make it a bit longer and someone might win a gameaday...
> It's not as easy as you think though,
> after 2 mins of trying
> you'll be hitting your head
> and shouting out DOH!
tee hee. you even rhyume your replies! Im not critsising you, Im just saying what I thought. Make it a bit longer and someone might win a gameaday...
Many people say I am quite funny
And if I win game a day
I won't have to spend that much money
And if I win game a day
I won't have to spend that much money
ok, stop with the rhyming now...
If I stop rhyming I will lose my bet
The one with my bro
so i have to rhyme on the net
The one with my bro
so i have to rhyme on the net
you had a bet to rhyme on the net? how sad are you?!
That was rubbish! no offence intended domaye.
the bet was for THIRTY quid
My little bros a bit dense
Heck hes just a little kid
and he doesn't know the difference between
pounds or pence!
As for my poem I know it's pretty c**p
But hey isn't every rap?
My little bros a bit dense
Heck hes just a little kid
and he doesn't know the difference between
pounds or pence!
As for my poem I know it's pretty c**p
But hey isn't every rap?
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