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Well, it's that time again. I'm nearing the end of my latest story, called Freedom. It's been the hardest to write yet, which is why it's taken so long (sorry for the wait.)
Lots of new names in the story this time around, with a few regulars I used to know gone, and lots of new people. Lots of you are included, even if it's just a small part.
I'm not finished yet, and it's already over 8,000 words. So, I warn you that it's not something you'll read in 10 minutes or so. {:)
But I would really appreciate it if you did just read it. I don't care how long it takes-whether you read it on the day it was posted, or whether you finally manage to finish it a month after it's posted, I don't mind. If you could just reply to it with some feedback, perhaps what you liked about the story and what you didn't, then I'd really appreciate it.
Finally, I hope you enjoy it. Those of you who have read my previous ones will know I'm based towards more of a comedy, or sci-fi type of story. This one is much more serious, and I'm not sure if it will work or not. I hope it does.
So once again thank you for giving me this opportunity, and with some hard work and a bit of luck, the story should be up within the next 10 days (as long as homework doesn't become too much.)
Lots of new names in the story this time around, with a few regulars I used to know gone, and lots of new people. Lots of you are included, even if it's just a small part.
I'm not finished yet, and it's already over 8,000 words. So, I warn you that it's not something you'll read in 10 minutes or so. {:)
But I would really appreciate it if you did just read it. I don't care how long it takes-whether you read it on the day it was posted, or whether you finally manage to finish it a month after it's posted, I don't mind. If you could just reply to it with some feedback, perhaps what you liked about the story and what you didn't, then I'd really appreciate it.
Finally, I hope you enjoy it. Those of you who have read my previous ones will know I'm based towards more of a comedy, or sci-fi type of story. This one is much more serious, and I'm not sure if it will work or not. I hope it does.
So once again thank you for giving me this opportunity, and with some hard work and a bit of luck, the story should be up within the next 10 days (as long as homework doesn't become too much.)
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Ant wrote:
You have a
> part GB, I believe.
ahe hem!
:-)
You have a
> part GB, I believe.
ahe hem!
:-)
YES!
At last, somebody recognises my presence!
SO you want me to find my story and POP it?
At last, somebody recognises my presence!
SO you want me to find my story and POP it?
Gaming Boy wrote:
> Whoooaaaa! The Ant-ster is back with another epic masterpiece!
I once wrote
> one in lots of little sections, one each day or so, but it lost popularity so
> it's gone, gone gone. . .
Wasn't even finished either. I reached the third
> part I think (or was it the second?), and then stopped when it sank to the
> bottom.
>I wonder if I can find it again and pop it upwards. . .
Yeah, I'd like to read it.
You have a part GB, I believe.
> Whoooaaaa! The Ant-ster is back with another epic masterpiece!
I once wrote
> one in lots of little sections, one each day or so, but it lost popularity so
> it's gone, gone gone. . .
Wasn't even finished either. I reached the third
> part I think (or was it the second?), and then stopped when it sank to the
> bottom.
>I wonder if I can find it again and pop it upwards. . .
Yeah, I'd like to read it.
You have a part GB, I believe.
There goes another GAD. . .
Whoooaaaa! The Ant-ster is back with another epic masterpiece!
I once wrote one in lots of little sections, one each day or so, but it lost popularity so it's gone, gone gone. . .
Wasn't even finished either. I reached the third part I think (or was it the second?), and then stopped when it sank to the bottom.
I wonder if I can find it again and pop it upwards. . .
I once wrote one in lots of little sections, one each day or so, but it lost popularity so it's gone, gone gone. . .
Wasn't even finished either. I reached the third part I think (or was it the second?), and then stopped when it sank to the bottom.
I wonder if I can find it again and pop it upwards. . .
SCAMPS wrote:
> Are newbie`s included?
I think there are a couple, but I can include more.
> Are newbie`s included?
I think there are a couple, but I can include more.
I look forward to reading it.
Well, it's that time again. I'm nearing the end of my latest story, called Freedom. It's been the hardest to write yet, which is why it's taken so long (sorry for the wait.)
Lots of new names in the story this time around, with a few regulars I used to know gone, and lots of new people. Lots of you are included, even if it's just a small part.
I'm not finished yet, and it's already over 8,000 words. So, I warn you that it's not something you'll read in 10 minutes or so. {:)
But I would really appreciate it if you did just read it. I don't care how long it takes-whether you read it on the day it was posted, or whether you finally manage to finish it a month after it's posted, I don't mind. If you could just reply to it with some feedback, perhaps what you liked about the story and what you didn't, then I'd really appreciate it.
Finally, I hope you enjoy it. Those of you who have read my previous ones will know I'm based towards more of a comedy, or sci-fi type of story. This one is much more serious, and I'm not sure if it will work or not. I hope it does.
So once again thank you for giving me this opportunity, and with some hard work and a bit of luck, the story should be up within the next 10 days (as long as homework doesn't become too much.)
Lots of new names in the story this time around, with a few regulars I used to know gone, and lots of new people. Lots of you are included, even if it's just a small part.
I'm not finished yet, and it's already over 8,000 words. So, I warn you that it's not something you'll read in 10 minutes or so. {:)
But I would really appreciate it if you did just read it. I don't care how long it takes-whether you read it on the day it was posted, or whether you finally manage to finish it a month after it's posted, I don't mind. If you could just reply to it with some feedback, perhaps what you liked about the story and what you didn't, then I'd really appreciate it.
Finally, I hope you enjoy it. Those of you who have read my previous ones will know I'm based towards more of a comedy, or sci-fi type of story. This one is much more serious, and I'm not sure if it will work or not. I hope it does.
So once again thank you for giving me this opportunity, and with some hard work and a bit of luck, the story should be up within the next 10 days (as long as homework doesn't become too much.)
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