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"Short Story: The Devil's Invasion"

Okay, I'll put it in the next post as it's rather long. Remember:It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.

Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.

Okay, this story, like my last one, is dedicated everyone here on SR. All the moderators and all the posters-special thanks go to the Notables. Without all of you, this would not have been possible.

Thanks for reading, Ant.

*Hurrah*

The Game wrote:
> So... is there any chance of sequel?!

He owns a PlayStation 2, of course there'll be a sequel!

Some great ideas in there Ant, and a good read... and err... sorry Meka and Wookiee, Wookiee especially, I suppose.

Very well written Ant. I've gotta admit, you seem to have crowned yourself best story-writer with that one! Maybe a little blasphemous in parts... lol... Just Kidding, it's a story, and a great one at that.

So... is there any chance of sequel?!

How about - those yellow balls transported Meka and Wookiee... not killed them and they decided to rebel again, creating a seperate earth... then, with the help of a few former demons, and it's up to the humans and angels to battle it out against the 'humuns' and Demuns!

:D

Your Honour wrote:
> That was very good. A most enjoyable read.

Another GAD winging
> it's way to you perhaps...?

Maybe I should have posted my story
> on Prime, it may have got more people reading it then...

I would advise doing that, and then putting it on the stories forum later as an archive.

Man that was huge!

Good story, and thanks for the part. Head of the Board of Light makes me the most important being in existance, eh?

:-D

Top class, well done.

True, it seems that the actual forum for this kind of brilliance is being ignored, perhaps Ant forgot about it?

But then again, he could of wanted to post it here to get the attention it deserves.

Nevertheless, I'll say it again - Brill' story Ant - well done, my son!

That was very good. A most enjoyable read.

Another GAD winging it's way to you perhaps...?

Maybe I should have posted my story on Prime, it may have got more people reading it then...

Heavens above!! This is fantastic Ant. I loved it.

Now I know why it took you so long...

How on earth (no pun intended) did you come up with that? It was truly inspired (again, no pun intended).

My favourite parts was the chocolate banter and the parrots.

Once again, truly wonderful.