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"Short Story: The Devil's Invasion"

Okay, I'll put it in the next post as it's rather long. Remember:It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.

Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.

Okay, this story, like my last one, is dedicated everyone here on SR. All the moderators and all the posters-special thanks go to the Notables. Without all of you, this would not have been possible.

Thanks for reading, Ant.

DeltaJava wrote:
> Ant wrote:

Was my story too long?? Should I shorten
> them a
> bit?? I mean, it had to be that long so I could fit all the
>
> details in, but my next one could be shorter if you wanted...

No,
> no - it's nothing to do with the length of your story... in my
> opinion, the bigger the better! It's just my monitor... it's a 15
> inch one, and it's maximum resolution is 800x600, and when I look at
> the screen for more than 2 minutes, it makes my vision all fuzzy.
> But that'll soon change with my new 17" flat panel monitor.

Ah, okay. Cheers for clearing that up, DJ.

Humm...I haven't had that much of a response here...I'll put it on Chat in a few days, probably.

Ant wrote:

Was my story too long?? Should I shorten
> them a bit?? I mean, it had to be that long so I could fit all the
> details in, but my next one could be shorter if you wanted...

No, no - it's nothing to do with the length of your story... in my opinion, the bigger the better! It's just my monitor... it's a 15 inch one, and it's maximum resolution is 800x600, and when I look at the screen for more than 2 minutes, it makes my vision all fuzzy. But that'll soon change with my new 17" flat panel monitor.

DeltaJava wrote:
> I'm sorry, but this story is too long to read on-screen. i'll read
> it once my new TFT monitor has arrived.

LOL! Okay.

Was my story too long?? Should I shorten them a bit?? I mean, it had to be that long so I could fit all the details in, but my next one could be shorter if you wanted...

I'm sorry, but this story is too long to read on-screen. i'll read it once my new TFT monitor has arrived.

M16 wrote:

Trust me in having to work with a bloody sheep!
> (No offense SHEEPY) ;-)

Bah! You got the cushy part too!
You got the chance to go and knock out all those daemons.


I was stuck as a wealking little messenger...

:-D

Good story Ant. Although i wonder where the idea for my part came from...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

*semajal looks nastilly at Ant*


HA HA HA *OWWWWW*

My a**e!

Great story, ant!

Trust me in having to work with a bloody sheep! (No offense SHEEPY) ;-)

Favourite bit:
“Time for you to die, scum,” M16 sneered

Pure class!
:D

Again, well done ant.

I AM THE ALMIGHTY AND I CALL YOUR NUMBER VENOMBYTE..... 8...... 11?....... 124?....... 1857?....... 1856483?...... 1859275648?......Oh I give up!!!

:)

Read it at last!

I thought it was very original.

If anyone hasn't read it yet, I recommend you do so - it's definitely worth doing.

Unless you're over 70, in which case you might not have time to finish reading it before the almighty calls your number..

There may be a sequel, but if it's as hard as it was to write this one, then there may not be.

Who knows, eh?

Thanks for the comments.{:)