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"Short Story: The Devil's Invasion"

Okay, I'll put it in the next post as it's rather long. Remember:It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.

Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.

Okay, this story, like my last one, is dedicated everyone here on SR. All the moderators and all the posters-special thanks go to the Notables. Without all of you, this would not have been possible.

Thanks for reading, Ant.

Yep, it was a poison tipped tinned carrot.

I liked my part as an angel. Especially near the end, where I got to poke a demon with... a carrot. Was it a carrot? I forgot.

DeltaJava wrote:
> Just finished reading the story.

Ant, that was a truly fantastic
> story! Here are my favourite parts:

1) The bit about Iguana
> throwing a stone at Reaper that apparently missed and hit Earth -
> nice explanation to the extinction of the dinosaurs!

Yeah, you seemed to be the only person who thought that was the best part. I thought it was as well. :D

2) The way
> the heavens are organised into classes, and that er-no
> "rebelled" to form the devil, and made a rebellion HQ that
> somehow was called "hell". Funny.

To be honest, I've no idea where all that came from. It just suddenly poured out...inspiration, I guess.

3) How the whole story was planned.

Why thank you. :) Hope you enjoyed your part, even if it was smallish.

Just finished reading the story.

Ant, that was a truly fantastic story! Here are my favourite parts:

1) The bit about Iguana throwing a stone at Reaper that apparently missed and hit Earth - nice explanation to the extinction of the dinosaurs!

2) The way the heavens are organised into classes, and that er-no "rebelled" to form the devil, and made a rebellion HQ that somehow was called "hell". Funny.

3) How the whole story was planned.

RastaBillySkank wrote:
> M16 wrote:
> I think that ant should still be rewarded for his
> supper effort.

He should indeed. And if SR are feeling generous
> maybe they will reward him for this great story. We'll leave the
> supper rewarding to Ant's mum...

;-D

LOL!!

Nah, I don't really mind, as it got a great reception from all readers. {:)

Lol, poor me! :(

Maybe SR will give ME a game to make me feel better?
;-D

M16 wrote:
> I think that ant should still be rewarded for his supper effort.

He should indeed. And if SR are feeling generous maybe they will reward him for this great story. We'll leave the supper rewarding to Ant's mum...

;-D

I think that ant should still be rewarded for his supper effort.

Unbelievably, this didn't win gameaday.

I'm sure Ant won't mind though, after all, it's not like it was ignored.

A story is too long if someone gets bored reading it.

Yours stayed interesting all the way through so no problem there.
The fact that so many people finished a giant post like that proves that it can't have been to long.