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Okay, due to the success of Those Little Voices In Your Head, and the sequel to it, I've decided to write another short story. At the moment it is about 75% completed, and will most likely be up next week.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
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RastaBillySkank wrote:
> You write in size 14?!?! I write everything in size 12, nearly all
> of my serious posts are over a page and are all written in
> 12.
>Sheesh, you should have grown out of size 14 by now :-D
Hey, I used to write in size 16.
Anyway, I write serious posts and reviews in 12, but stories in 14, as it makes them easier to read when I'm going over them.
> You write in size 14?!?! I write everything in size 12, nearly all
> of my serious posts are over a page and are all written in
> 12.
>Sheesh, you should have grown out of size 14 by now :-D
Hey, I used to write in size 16.
Anyway, I write serious posts and reviews in 12, but stories in 14, as it makes them easier to read when I'm going over them.
Hmm, I started a series of strange conversations about computer games in general, but seeing as no-one was interested, I gave up.
You write in size 14?!?! I write everything in size 12, nearly all of my serious posts are over a page and are all written in 12.
Sheesh, you should have grown out of size 14 by now :-D
Sheesh, you should have grown out of size 14 by now :-D
I am willing to help in any way I can. I'm also willing to read it all the way through.
Ant I should have a part, as I am the greatest er..... greatest *struggles to think of anything and leaves in a rage*
Okay, due to the success of Those Little Voices In Your Head, and the sequel to it, I've decided to write another short story. At the moment it is about 75% completed, and will most likely be up next week.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
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