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Okay, due to the success of Those Little Voices In Your Head, and the sequel to it, I've decided to write another short story. At the moment it is about 75% completed, and will most likely be up next week.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
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92% complete...{:)
Saturday then! :-)
90% complete now...
It's now most likely it'll be in this week, actually. Wednesday-Friday.
It's now most likely it'll be in this week, actually. Wednesday-Friday.
Hey guys...... Ant told me I was going to be in the story last night......
apparently im a pieca poo, that someone treads in or something.....
oh well..... its a start...... first poo, next..... erm..... the world!
MWA HA HA HA :-)
apparently im a pieca poo, that someone treads in or something.....
oh well..... its a start...... first poo, next..... erm..... the world!
MWA HA HA HA :-)
Ant, if you want some specific help on stuff, just ask mate.
I was going to use a room as my example for you, but didn't know exactly how you wanted it, so I thought I could give you examples with a lane.
I was going to use a room as my example for you, but didn't know exactly how you wanted it, so I thought I could give you examples with a lane.
BIG thanks to YH, who has helped withthe descriptive writing in the story by giving me a few pointers.
Cheers mate.
Anyway, it's now 85% complete! And Dogfather is in it-I just wrote his bit! :D
Cheers mate.
Anyway, it's now 85% complete! And Dogfather is in it-I just wrote his bit! :D
The Dogfather wrote:
> DeltaJava wrote:
> Hmm, I started a series of strange
> conversations about computer
> games in general, but seeing as
> no-one was interested, I gave up.
I know you just try and help.
> No use what so ever. If you look at most GAD winners not many
> people have replied to them as they are serious. But what would you
> rather a serious chat topic which no one enters and you win GAD, or
> a comical one where people enter and you win nothing? Comical one's
> make good conversations, but that's about it. Intresting one's make
> good reading and equally good replies, if anybody does reply.
What? But my convs were funny, and still no-one replied. MAybe they were too long?
> DeltaJava wrote:
> Hmm, I started a series of strange
> conversations about computer
> games in general, but seeing as
> no-one was interested, I gave up.
I know you just try and help.
> No use what so ever. If you look at most GAD winners not many
> people have replied to them as they are serious. But what would you
> rather a serious chat topic which no one enters and you win GAD, or
> a comical one where people enter and you win nothing? Comical one's
> make good conversations, but that's about it. Intresting one's make
> good reading and equally good replies, if anybody does reply.
What? But my convs were funny, and still no-one replied. MAybe they were too long?
Emphesis on short there ANT!!! good to know im a parrot innit!
Heh Ant your funny. Print off 20 pages! What do you think I am? Made of ink cartradges? ;-)
I will look foward too reading it Ant.
I will look foward too reading it Ant.
DeltaJava wrote:
> Hmm, I started a series of strange conversations about computer
> games in general, but seeing as no-one was interested, I gave up.
I know you just try and help. No use what so ever. If you look at most GAD winners not many people have replied to them as they are serious. But what would you rather a serious chat topic which no one enters and you win GAD, or a comical one where people enter and you win nothing? Comical one's make good conversations, but that's about it. Intresting one's make good reading and equally good replies, if anybody does reply.
> Hmm, I started a series of strange conversations about computer
> games in general, but seeing as no-one was interested, I gave up.
I know you just try and help. No use what so ever. If you look at most GAD winners not many people have replied to them as they are serious. But what would you rather a serious chat topic which no one enters and you win GAD, or a comical one where people enter and you win nothing? Comical one's make good conversations, but that's about it. Intresting one's make good reading and equally good replies, if anybody does reply.
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