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Okay, due to the success of Those Little Voices In Your Head, and the sequel to it, I've decided to write another short story. At the moment it is about 75% completed, and will most likely be up next week.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
It is NOT another sequel to Voices, it is completely new. It's mostly comedy, with a bit of action and adventure.
As I always do, I try to include everyoner who is currently posting on the forums. Unfortunately, I tried giving everyone decent parts in Voices 2, and it didn't work. So it's most likely that you will have your name mentioned, and perhaps a few speaking parts, but only a few of you will be included regularly. I hope this won't stop you from reading it, however.
It will be called "The Devil's Invasion," and will be posted on FOG Prime first, and then a few days later on FOG Chat (as not everybody visits both forums.) I will notify you on this topic when it is up.
Very important: It will be rather long. It's 16 pages in size 14 at the moment, so it will be about 24 when it's done. If you are gonna read it, please make sure you have about 20-30 minutes spare. If not, just leave it until later, or print it off and read it in parts.
Oh, one more thing. When you've read it all, could you please reply telling me your favourite part, why you enjoyed it (if you did,) and constructive critisicm is appreciated, as it will hopefully improve my next story.
Thanks for reading, Ant.
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LOL! That was great Dan, I should make you my Head of Advertising. {:)
Now Showing in FOG PRIME.
From the creator of "Voices".
A new Saga about the battle for the heavens...
**Shows clip of M16 taking out daemons**
Starring PB,
**Shows clip of PB commanding the 1st and 2nd class Angels into battle**
Er-no,
**Shows clip of Er-no leading the 3rd and 4th class angels**
and Meka Dragon...
**Shows clip of Meka doing his Evl Laugh**
In this epic war picture...
**One last clip of the Daemons attacking earth**
The Devil's Invasion!
Now showing in FOG PRIME.
From the creator of "Voices".
A new Saga about the battle for the heavens...
**Shows clip of M16 taking out daemons**
Starring PB,
**Shows clip of PB commanding the 1st and 2nd class Angels into battle**
Er-no,
**Shows clip of Er-no leading the 3rd and 4th class angels**
and Meka Dragon...
**Shows clip of Meka doing his Evl Laugh**
In this epic war picture...
**One last clip of the Daemons attacking earth**
The Devil's Invasion!
Now showing in FOG PRIME.
Ant, it's well good!
Well done mate!
Well done mate!
Okay, it's up now on FOG Prime.
However, if I don't get a good reception there, I may post it here as well, as I know some people don't visit both forums.
However, if I don't get a good reception there, I may post it here as well, as I know some people don't visit both forums.
Shock you are without a doubt doing absolotly nothing wonrg, I just wanted to say that.
TENSION - NOT TENION!!
I love new stories!! Yay for Ant!!
And happily, I believe I have a part somewhere...along the...line ;-)
No, can't wait, Ant - keep the good work up!
*Shocktrooper giggles hysterically with tenion and excitement* :-D
And happily, I believe I have a part somewhere...along the...line ;-)
No, can't wait, Ant - keep the good work up!
*Shocktrooper giggles hysterically with tenion and excitement* :-D
75% complete... 16 pages...
4 pages per 25%.
75% + 25% = 100%
16pg + 4pg = 20pg
26 when it's done...
Of course, it doesn't apply to writing stories until the story has ended. And it the theory is assuming that there is the same amount of words give or take a few, on each page...
Sorry... i'm just thinking out loud... don't mind me!
I can't wait for the story... I better have a good part. Can I feed Bonus to the crocodiles... or throw Sniper out a plane door? I also want to be armed with a frying pan...
Devil - Frying - Hell, there is a link... please?! ^_^
4 pages per 25%.
75% + 25% = 100%
16pg + 4pg = 20pg
26 when it's done...
Of course, it doesn't apply to writing stories until the story has ended. And it the theory is assuming that there is the same amount of words give or take a few, on each page...
Sorry... i'm just thinking out loud... don't mind me!
I can't wait for the story... I better have a good part. Can I feed Bonus to the crocodiles... or throw Sniper out a plane door? I also want to be armed with a frying pan...
Devil - Frying - Hell, there is a link... please?! ^_^
I WANT STORY!
FOG TV Presents the Premier of "The Devil's Invasion", directed by Ant, creator of the Voices series.
Coming to the Story forum soon.
Stories are beginning to be advertised now. Y and Ant both putting adverts in FOG Chat.
I will follow suit with my own two part story to be released soon.
I've nearly finished the first part.
It compromises of a plot which I don't think has been done before.
Coming to the Story forum soon.
Stories are beginning to be advertised now. Y and Ant both putting adverts in FOG Chat.
I will follow suit with my own two part story to be released soon.
I've nearly finished the first part.
It compromises of a plot which I don't think has been done before.
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