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Hey all, It's my birthday tomorrow. So for fun, I am going to write, or start, a contineous story. I will post it here tomorrow. I hope you all contribute and make it good. If any one else has any other ideas for stuff to do tomorrow, put it here.
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*FLASH* A brilliant white light blinded everyone in the room.
"What the fu........," screamed IB who had been knocked to the floor.
Eventually the light began to fade and everyone looked at each other in a very confused manner. "What happened there?" said a muddled Jet.
He never had to wait for an answer. He noticed it himself. In the exact place that KR and Longy were standing there were charred circles on the carpet of the hall.
"Hey wait you guys somethin is there," exclaimed Grand Prix.
In the place of KR and Longy were two peices of paper. The notes both had the same message on them. They read like this:
Dear Ice Blaster,
after a lot of thinking we have come to the conclusion that you don't really like us....we don't know why but it just seems like that. So for your birthday we have given you a great present. We have banished ourselves from the WWF forums never to be seen spamming again *hint* *hint*. Hope you like the present.......and have a nice day.
KR and Longy
"How about that then," IB spluttered, "what else could happen to me? Nothing is gonna beat this present. I mean KR and Longy gone forever. That will take some beating."
"just wait till he sees my present then," MJ said to Jet...........
CONTINUE
"What the fu........," screamed IB who had been knocked to the floor.
Eventually the light began to fade and everyone looked at each other in a very confused manner. "What happened there?" said a muddled Jet.
He never had to wait for an answer. He noticed it himself. In the exact place that KR and Longy were standing there were charred circles on the carpet of the hall.
"Hey wait you guys somethin is there," exclaimed Grand Prix.
In the place of KR and Longy were two peices of paper. The notes both had the same message on them. They read like this:
Dear Ice Blaster,
after a lot of thinking we have come to the conclusion that you don't really like us....we don't know why but it just seems like that. So for your birthday we have given you a great present. We have banished ourselves from the WWF forums never to be seen spamming again *hint* *hint*. Hope you like the present.......and have a nice day.
KR and Longy
"How about that then," IB spluttered, "what else could happen to me? Nothing is gonna beat this present. I mean KR and Longy gone forever. That will take some beating."
"just wait till he sees my present then," MJ said to Jet...........
CONTINUE
The package was very oddly shaped indeed and poorly wrapped
Ice Blaster nervously poked at it smiling nicely at MJ as he did, (he had to open it, it was the only decent thing to do) shaking, he opened it to find it to be RawisAndy in a very disorderly state!
“I found him outside slumped over a bin with an empty bottle of Vodka in his hand” Explained MJ
Ice Blaster looked around at where he left his opened pressies from earlier.
“Oh goddamit Andy that was mine!”
Andy looked up and saw everyone staring at him and muttered something about someone having all the luck or something like that and then turned and ran out of the door!
Jet whispers into MJ’s ear…
“Is that what you got him for his birthday?
“Nah I got a bigger surprise for him later” grinning as he spoke.
“This is gonna be his best birthday yet!”
Just then there was a knock at the door, IB opened it and it was Longy and Kid Rock!
Jet whispered to MJ again
“That’s not the present is it, a couple of spammers!”
“No mines something that we will all like!”
Longy and Kid Rock had each brought extra presents (lucky you IB), Longy handed his over and Kid Rock put his on the table unopened.
IB looked down at the pressie and began to unwrap it, it was quite big and long
“I wonder what it is?” IB wondered to himself
Just then Longy and Kid Rock ran to the other end of the hall and took cover and held their ears! The others in the hall looked at them, then at each other and too ran to take cover for no reason at all, leaving IB in the middle of the hall alone with Longy’s present!
“Open it!” shouted Longy
Then a few giggles came from where KR and Longy were hiding.
IB was very nervous of what lay under the pretty wrapping paper and looked around the room to see everyone hiding behind objects staring at him
What the hell was it?
Should IB open it?
He has to!
IB cautiously began to unwrap the present peeking under the wrapper but couldn’t see anything and after a few more attempts at seeing what it was he ripped the whole damn thing off when…………………!
Ice Blaster nervously poked at it smiling nicely at MJ as he did, (he had to open it, it was the only decent thing to do) shaking, he opened it to find it to be RawisAndy in a very disorderly state!
“I found him outside slumped over a bin with an empty bottle of Vodka in his hand” Explained MJ
Ice Blaster looked around at where he left his opened pressies from earlier.
“Oh goddamit Andy that was mine!”
Andy looked up and saw everyone staring at him and muttered something about someone having all the luck or something like that and then turned and ran out of the door!
Jet whispers into MJ’s ear…
“Is that what you got him for his birthday?
“Nah I got a bigger surprise for him later” grinning as he spoke.
“This is gonna be his best birthday yet!”
Just then there was a knock at the door, IB opened it and it was Longy and Kid Rock!
Jet whispered to MJ again
“That’s not the present is it, a couple of spammers!”
“No mines something that we will all like!”
Longy and Kid Rock had each brought extra presents (lucky you IB), Longy handed his over and Kid Rock put his on the table unopened.
IB looked down at the pressie and began to unwrap it, it was quite big and long
“I wonder what it is?” IB wondered to himself
Just then Longy and Kid Rock ran to the other end of the hall and took cover and held their ears! The others in the hall looked at them, then at each other and too ran to take cover for no reason at all, leaving IB in the middle of the hall alone with Longy’s present!
“Open it!” shouted Longy
Then a few giggles came from where KR and Longy were hiding.
IB was very nervous of what lay under the pretty wrapping paper and looked around the room to see everyone hiding behind objects staring at him
What the hell was it?
Should IB open it?
He has to!
IB cautiously began to unwrap the present peeking under the wrapper but couldn’t see anything and after a few more attempts at seeing what it was he ripped the whole damn thing off when…………………!
Mean while everyone was getting jiggy with it in the hall. Jet then walked over to IB and said "Well IB i got you anouther present this present reflects the true Daddy that i am enjoy.."
Ib then replied "what could it possible be"?
Then a huge cake was wealed out of the kitchen it was laid to rest in the centre of the room.
IB then walked to the cake and he was a bout to taste it when.... BOOM streamers flew out of the cake and shocked everyone IB was very happy but then JET said "If you enjoyed that take a look inside.
IB peared inside and then Trish Stratus and Lita jumped out and started to get NAKIE!!
Everyone went wild!!
After 10 minutes of pure uncensored and expliset heaven Trish and Lita left the buliding.
IB was thrilled he said "WOW that was GRRRREEEEAAATTT!
While every one was stilled hiped up MJ returned with an unusaul shaped gift wrapped package.............
CONTINUE
Ib then replied "what could it possible be"?
Then a huge cake was wealed out of the kitchen it was laid to rest in the centre of the room.
IB then walked to the cake and he was a bout to taste it when.... BOOM streamers flew out of the cake and shocked everyone IB was very happy but then JET said "If you enjoyed that take a look inside.
IB peared inside and then Trish Stratus and Lita jumped out and started to get NAKIE!!
Everyone went wild!!
After 10 minutes of pure uncensored and expliset heaven Trish and Lita left the buliding.
IB was thrilled he said "WOW that was GRRRREEEEAAATTT!
While every one was stilled hiped up MJ returned with an unusaul shaped gift wrapped package.............
CONTINUE
.....and MJ.
"Hi," said Ice blastr and Grand Prix.
"Good to see you too guys," said MJ feeling slightly battered after his last venture into the WWF forums. He had forgot how rough and vicious they were there. He wasn't taking anymore chances though. Now he was friends with Jet so he knew that he would be safe.
"What are you doing in the fOG then Jet. You normally are hovering around the WWF," asked Ice Blaster in an inquisative voice.
"MJ asked me to come along. He told me that the WWF members were going to have an INVASION of the FOG," replied Jet, "happy birthday by the way Ice Blaster. Hope my present got to you safely".
"Yeah it's great. How did you know what I wanted?" Asked Ice Blaster.
"Well it had nothing to do with you going on and on about it for the past couple of days I can assure you," all of them began to laugh only to be cut off by MJ whispering something to Jet.
"I forgot his Birthday......how am I supposed to get people to like me if I forget their birthdays. He even reminded me yesterday," muttered MJ in Jet's ear.
"Don't worry I will give them a reason for you to leave and then you can buy it then," Jet whispered back.
"Thanks for that......see you guys later yeah," MJ said out loud.
"Where are you going?" Asked Grand Prix.
"He needs to go and....um work on his .... ummmmm web page. It needs to be up by tonight or he gets fired fom his job," explained Jet.
MJ tooks his chance and ran off down the road to buy his present............
CONTINUE
"Hi," said Ice blastr and Grand Prix.
"Good to see you too guys," said MJ feeling slightly battered after his last venture into the WWF forums. He had forgot how rough and vicious they were there. He wasn't taking anymore chances though. Now he was friends with Jet so he knew that he would be safe.
"What are you doing in the fOG then Jet. You normally are hovering around the WWF," asked Ice Blaster in an inquisative voice.
"MJ asked me to come along. He told me that the WWF members were going to have an INVASION of the FOG," replied Jet, "happy birthday by the way Ice Blaster. Hope my present got to you safely".
"Yeah it's great. How did you know what I wanted?" Asked Ice Blaster.
"Well it had nothing to do with you going on and on about it for the past couple of days I can assure you," all of them began to laugh only to be cut off by MJ whispering something to Jet.
"I forgot his Birthday......how am I supposed to get people to like me if I forget their birthdays. He even reminded me yesterday," muttered MJ in Jet's ear.
"Don't worry I will give them a reason for you to leave and then you can buy it then," Jet whispered back.
"Thanks for that......see you guys later yeah," MJ said out loud.
"Where are you going?" Asked Grand Prix.
"He needs to go and....um work on his .... ummmmm web page. It needs to be up by tonight or he gets fired fom his job," explained Jet.
MJ tooks his chance and ran off down the road to buy his present............
CONTINUE
Friday, July 13th, 2001. Ice Blaster was fast asleep. It was about 10am.
A knock on the door awoke Ice Blaster. Groggily he woke up, another knock.
“Ok, OK I’m coming”
Ice Blaster opened the door steadily. It was Jet.
“Happy Birthday Ice Blaster” He said
Ice Blaster looked at him, frowned and said “thanks”
“Meet is at the hall at 2pm Ice, ok?” Jet asked
“Yer sure” Replied Ice Blaster.
Jet left and Ice Blaster closed the door. He walked through into the kitchen to make some breakfast. He was still very tired and didn’t really notice that it was his birthday until he saw a box, gift-wrapped. He glanced at it, and picked it up.
“Happy birthday IB
From Longy”
Ice Blaster smiled to himself; he tore away at the paper quite quickly to reveal a card box. He opened up the box to reveal a pair of red socks.
Ice Blaster groaned and put the box back on the floor.
The were more presents. He opened them up.
Ant sent him a GAD prize, Jet had sent a ECW video, Rawisandy had sent a bottle of Vodka, Grandprix sent £10, Kid Rock sent a woolly Jumper, 123123 sent a CD as did Big Slow, Khazar had forgotten a Present, but Ice Blaster wasn’t too bothered. He smiled at his pile of presents, and looked at the Jumper Kid Rock had sent.
‘It’s the middle of summer’ Ice Blaster thought to himself. ‘Oh well, it’s the thought that counts’.
Ice got changed and decided to go for a walk. He had barely set foot out of the door and he bumped into Khazar.
“Sorry mate, I forgot your birthday, but here’s a card”
“Thanks man” replied Ice Blaster
Ice Blaster opened up the card, 10£ inside and a singing clown. Ice Blaster and Khazar both laughed.
“Were are you off?” asked Ice Blaster
In reply, Khazar said, “To beat up TW”
The laughed and departed.
Ice Blaster looked at his watch, 12:30, 2 ½ hours to go.
“Hey” Ant said
“Y’ello” Ice said.
“Whatya up to Ant?” Ice Blaster asked
“I’m off to FOG, wanna come?” said Ant
“Sure” replied Ice Blaster.
They both strolled out of the village and arrived at FOG.
It was quite deserted. RBS was taking the pi** out of the newbie’s. Khazar and TW were fighting and Tony was looking out of his front door.
Ant and Tony had a conversation about gardening. Ice Blaster wasn’t interested and went to see the Crome brothers fight.
It was getting quite late in the afternoon, so Ice Blaster decided to go to the hall.
He walked back to the village and met up with Grandprix. He was extremely bored, so Ice Blaster decided to invite him to the hall, Grandprix agreed.
They arrived at the hall to be greeted by Jet….
CONTINUE
A knock on the door awoke Ice Blaster. Groggily he woke up, another knock.
“Ok, OK I’m coming”
Ice Blaster opened the door steadily. It was Jet.
“Happy Birthday Ice Blaster” He said
Ice Blaster looked at him, frowned and said “thanks”
“Meet is at the hall at 2pm Ice, ok?” Jet asked
“Yer sure” Replied Ice Blaster.
Jet left and Ice Blaster closed the door. He walked through into the kitchen to make some breakfast. He was still very tired and didn’t really notice that it was his birthday until he saw a box, gift-wrapped. He glanced at it, and picked it up.
“Happy birthday IB
From Longy”
Ice Blaster smiled to himself; he tore away at the paper quite quickly to reveal a card box. He opened up the box to reveal a pair of red socks.
Ice Blaster groaned and put the box back on the floor.
The were more presents. He opened them up.
Ant sent him a GAD prize, Jet had sent a ECW video, Rawisandy had sent a bottle of Vodka, Grandprix sent £10, Kid Rock sent a woolly Jumper, 123123 sent a CD as did Big Slow, Khazar had forgotten a Present, but Ice Blaster wasn’t too bothered. He smiled at his pile of presents, and looked at the Jumper Kid Rock had sent.
‘It’s the middle of summer’ Ice Blaster thought to himself. ‘Oh well, it’s the thought that counts’.
Ice got changed and decided to go for a walk. He had barely set foot out of the door and he bumped into Khazar.
“Sorry mate, I forgot your birthday, but here’s a card”
“Thanks man” replied Ice Blaster
Ice Blaster opened up the card, 10£ inside and a singing clown. Ice Blaster and Khazar both laughed.
“Were are you off?” asked Ice Blaster
In reply, Khazar said, “To beat up TW”
The laughed and departed.
Ice Blaster looked at his watch, 12:30, 2 ½ hours to go.
“Hey” Ant said
“Y’ello” Ice said.
“Whatya up to Ant?” Ice Blaster asked
“I’m off to FOG, wanna come?” said Ant
“Sure” replied Ice Blaster.
They both strolled out of the village and arrived at FOG.
It was quite deserted. RBS was taking the pi** out of the newbie’s. Khazar and TW were fighting and Tony was looking out of his front door.
Ant and Tony had a conversation about gardening. Ice Blaster wasn’t interested and went to see the Crome brothers fight.
It was getting quite late in the afternoon, so Ice Blaster decided to go to the hall.
He walked back to the village and met up with Grandprix. He was extremely bored, so Ice Blaster decided to invite him to the hall, Grandprix agreed.
They arrived at the hall to be greeted by Jet….
CONTINUE
Ditto 4, ops!!
The story is going to appear at 12:00(midnight) the first seconds of my b/day!! So you have all day to reply!! Shame you won't be here Jet- still i'll shoove in some str***rs and kaz****s for you!! It will run through and beond my b/day though:)
The story is going to appear at 12:00(midnight) the first seconds of my b/day!! So you have all day to reply!! Shame you won't be here Jet- still i'll shoove in some str***rs and kaz****s for you!! It will run through and beond my b/day though:)
i will do
Tell me if its good and does it have RVDs song on it and whats it called.
thanx i hope so oh yeah my ecw cd should come tomorrow i cant wait
Your review is very good 123123 i think its a contender for GAD Good Luck.
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