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Tue 11/10/05 at 15:00
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Right, lets get this done. I am the winner, which is nice. You all know the rules by now, I'm sure:

-You can enter more than once, if you really feel the need.
-As long as you like

Good rules, those. The topic shall be:

Rescue

Hopefully there's a bit of scope there.

And your closing dates for these potential gems - 25th October

Get to it.

--

Here we go. I've had a good looksee at the entries over the past week or so, and I've known the winner since it was first posted, sorry. So it was a battle for 2nd and 3rd all the way, and it was close between pb, tnc, JFH and Prophet. I've gone with:

3rd - tnc, Is This Life?

Very atmospheric despite being quite short, which is hard to do. Well done.

2nd - Prophet, Hole In The Head

Liked pretty much everything you've written so far. This is no different. Nice flowing story.

1st - Black Glove, Nailer

I thought for a while about this. Not because it wasn't the best (which it was), but because the Glove won the one before this and I didn't want people to think I was choosing him because he chose mine, and all that. But I don't care, it was the best story by far. Shows imagination I wish I had and inspired use of words.




So there that is. Big hand to Glove.
Tue 25/10/05 at 17:51
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Want one? But then Crossbob might submit another one that I'll have to trawl through and weep like a babygirl. I can do a top three out of you, Prophet, tnc, pb and the Glovester tonight, but I'd like a leetle more competition.

I'll decide if I haven't got enough at midnight. Well, in the morning, I'll be beered up at midnight, most likely, because Andy Johnson will have beaten us in the League Cup 7-0.
Tue 25/10/05 at 17:28
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Today be the closing date. I predict an extended deadline I do.
Tue 25/10/05 at 07:59
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tnc wrote:
> Come on people, let's get those stories rolling!
>
> So far (of the ones that matter) only pb, Black Glove, JFH and
> Prophet have submitted stories.
>
> I submitted mine about a week back, but as usual I'm having mixed
> feelings about it.

i have submitted mines, and ive improved it.
Mon 24/10/05 at 22:53
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Added mine now much better then last one not so stupid.
Mon 24/10/05 at 22:08
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Come on people, let's get those stories rolling!

So far (of the ones that matter) only pb, Black Glove, JFH and Prophet have submitted stories.

I submitted mine about a week back, but as usual I'm having mixed feelings about it.
Mon 24/10/05 at 21:59
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Nearly finished my new one.
Mon 24/10/05 at 21:57
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I'm still working on mine.

I have time to work on it tomorrow evening, so should be able to get it finished.

Though it's not in the form of a short story, but, well, it tells a story.
Sun 23/10/05 at 09:18
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I've done something. It's a bit, well, stupid, but I'll post it soon, once I've attempted to "rescue" it from badness.
Sun 23/10/05 at 02:53
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Bob, it's hard to care about anything you say, really. I don't have to give a reason for setting a topic. But since you seem to want one, take your pick of:

1)Because the pixie-apes told me to
2)Because if you say Rescue 3 times in a mirror the door to Narnia opens
3)Because it's the magic word to rescue us all from your stories
4)Because I wanted to

P.S Glove, FFF, Meka, Rickoss etc - whats the deal, boys? Get it together.
Sat 22/10/05 at 11:56
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What reason????

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