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Thu 11/08/05 at 19:43
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If you're confused - FFF set SSC29 but then forget to judge it, so I asked Ant to judge it and make sure that I won, and he fufilled both duties with aplomb. So a big hand all round to Ant. That's right.

OK, rules, but I'm sure you all already know them:

-One entry per person

-As long as you like, I'm not fussed. Bend that 'short' definition all y'like.

-The closing date shall be 26nd August. At midnight. Although, again, I don't really care if it's posted at 12:34 or something. I'll still consider it if it's posted before I wake up the next day. Deal? Good stuff.

-The topic shall be Marine, and all things related. Y'know, like the ocean, shells, anchors, Popeye, stuff like that.

Go to it, people.

Edit: Closing date extended to 26th from 22nd

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Huzzah, it's the 26nd!.First one of these I've judged, so I hope I don't muck up too badly. Started off slowly, but then we got the big-hitters bringing their stuff into play, which was good. There was a group of 5 I was considering for the top 3, which kept on switching as I watched the stories from afar. But I must decide, and I have. Think I've made the right decision, though. Here we go:

3rd: Rickoss - Another Tide Drowns Us

Really atmospheric, drew me into the story and left me feeling regretful for the character. I love any story that is involving like that.

2nd: Ant - Dolphinia

Made me feel nostalgic for books I haven't read in years. I thought it was really high-quality writing to create a story like that.

1st: Meka Dragon - Keep Taking Those Pills

A great idea, brilliant imagination, great little cast of pseudo-pirate villains and heart-warming at the end. Really enjoyed it, and I've been coming back quite a few times to read it again. So yeah, one of the best stories I've ever read in here.


So, er, there we go. Congratulations to Meka are in order, I believe.
Sat 13/08/05 at 12:05
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"I like cheese"
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I'll try and give it a go sometime this weekend or next.
Fri 12/08/05 at 23:40
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"0228"
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Stryke wrote:
> Can't go wrong with a good Heidi Klum/Hitler love story, if you ask
> me.

In my story that would be dirty uncle/niece sex.
Fri 12/08/05 at 23:28
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"Puerile Shagging"
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Could be better.

KT and Hitler?
Fri 12/08/05 at 23:27
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Can't go wrong with a good Heidi Klum/Hitler love story, if you ask me.
Fri 12/08/05 at 23:08
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"0228"
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My story is already fantastic. I've already managed to put Kilgore Trout, smv, Angelina Jolie, Heidi Klum, Hitler, and Jennifer Aniston into it.
Fri 12/08/05 at 23:00
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I'm hoping for at least one pirate story, personally.
Fri 12/08/05 at 22:22
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Marine? thats a nice one. Action atories all the way. Perhaps i'll right one, but then i'm always saying that. Plus i don't have many ideas for the standard battle scene.
Fri 12/08/05 at 21:29
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> Can i illustrate it to?

Actually...
Could i do a comic strip? Its creative..and they'll be writing..And it'll have a story..
Fri 12/08/05 at 17:05
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Yeah, probably. Sensible, deep, and dark stories aren't my thing. I leave that to the rest of you.
Fri 12/08/05 at 17:03
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Another adventure, smv style? I look forward to it.

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