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Thu 11/08/05 at 19:43
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If you're confused - FFF set SSC29 but then forget to judge it, so I asked Ant to judge it and make sure that I won, and he fufilled both duties with aplomb. So a big hand all round to Ant. That's right.

OK, rules, but I'm sure you all already know them:

-One entry per person

-As long as you like, I'm not fussed. Bend that 'short' definition all y'like.

-The closing date shall be 26nd August. At midnight. Although, again, I don't really care if it's posted at 12:34 or something. I'll still consider it if it's posted before I wake up the next day. Deal? Good stuff.

-The topic shall be Marine, and all things related. Y'know, like the ocean, shells, anchors, Popeye, stuff like that.

Go to it, people.

Edit: Closing date extended to 26th from 22nd

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Huzzah, it's the 26nd!.First one of these I've judged, so I hope I don't muck up too badly. Started off slowly, but then we got the big-hitters bringing their stuff into play, which was good. There was a group of 5 I was considering for the top 3, which kept on switching as I watched the stories from afar. But I must decide, and I have. Think I've made the right decision, though. Here we go:

3rd: Rickoss - Another Tide Drowns Us

Really atmospheric, drew me into the story and left me feeling regretful for the character. I love any story that is involving like that.

2nd: Ant - Dolphinia

Made me feel nostalgic for books I haven't read in years. I thought it was really high-quality writing to create a story like that.

1st: Meka Dragon - Keep Taking Those Pills

A great idea, brilliant imagination, great little cast of pseudo-pirate villains and heart-warming at the end. Really enjoyed it, and I've been coming back quite a few times to read it again. So yeah, one of the best stories I've ever read in here.


So, er, there we go. Congratulations to Meka are in order, I believe.
Mon 22/08/05 at 20:19
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"Better Than You"
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Forgot about these for a while. Probably start doing them again, although I may start on the next one as nothing good pops to mind with this one.
Mon 22/08/05 at 17:37
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"spongemycarpetydont"
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C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> I was getting worried about the closing date today. But im going to
> write a story now.

Please no. I dont like competition
Mon 22/08/05 at 16:35
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"Catch it!"
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I was getting worried about the closing date today. But im going to write a story now.
Sun 21/08/05 at 20:27
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Yay, I've got until the 26nd!
Sun 21/08/05 at 00:07
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"not dead"
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So far, the only thing Mariny, is that it's set in a marina. But it could well be a warehouse. Must give it a bit o' a sea shanty.

It's kinda fish based, but to my horror, when 'researching' I discovered it's a bloody river fish.

However, I may have come up with the answer, as I write this...

Well it's done now. Keep Taking Those Pills.
Sat 20/08/05 at 23:10
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"Laughingstock"
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I will endeavour to enter (I always do), but sometimes it just donna appen.
Sat 20/08/05 at 23:06
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"0228"
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Nice of you to say so, but let's be honest, it really wasn't very good at all.
Sat 20/08/05 at 23:01
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Ah, but I quite liked your story. Different from the usual.
Sat 20/08/05 at 22:58
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"0228"
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Oh poop. My dreams of a podium finish have come to an end.
Sat 20/08/05 at 22:54
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Right, I'm moving the closing date. A few people have complained about it, and I only set it that close because of the age it took to get yours marked ;)

I'll push it back 4 days or so.

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