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> OMG did your friend hurt his leg slapping it so much?
Haha. Silly, it was his face that he was hitting. It makes much more sense now, eh? :D
Oh, and Bob, nice "song".
> to be honest i
> think one of those computer text readers would have been better and
> more entertaining.
Would have been more lively than Crossbob's rendition.
sorry, but seriously, do you often lose your place whilst reading? what did you do look away? shouldnt do that, and is your hand writing that bad that it takes you many attempts to read it? if so type it out on a computer it also helps. i found this very boring, "the army man, army men started running. backwards, shooting at the same time." could make it so much more exciting, "as the army men retreted(sp?) they did not give up hope of their lost battle against the monkeys and continued to fire at them" or something, you need a lot of work on this, especially with the way you read it. it is a very dull and mostly mono-tone, apart from the points in which you wisper a shout, as someone has said, if it is to be shouted, shout it.
Anyway Bob, lets hear something from the 'album'.
I find myself editing almost all of my posts. Occassionally for typos but usually just because I think of something else/different to say.