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I watch as her children grow as intently as I watch my own. I was the first, she was the impostor But I refused to become so subservient, and for my stand against Him I was banished.
Adam. He thought himself so much better than me, and for this I suffer. My children die for my equality, not a fair trade in any sense. And so I return the compliment. Her daughters spread too far and wide. Look at the damage they’ve done to this earth. They hold Adam’s sons captive with their ways.
But I have brought balance. The modern world is so simple to manipulate. I have turned the minds of Adam’s sons to the perfect form of woman. They are disillusioned by their wives and their partners. Her daughters are distraught by their bodies, their lives taken up with manipulating their fragile husks to fight the force of nature. All the while, the two that would unite fight their battles with their own selves. They prevent their unison to each other through vanity.
My daughters do not worry about such things, for they have a perfect form to all men. They walk the world with the power over men. The sons of Adam eagerly provide them with seed to multiply. One day we will outnumber them and I will have my retribution.
For now, I just watch and take pleasure on the sleeping sons of the first. For I am the other Eve, the first of all women.
Adam. He thought himself so much better than me, and for this I suffer. My children die for my equality, not a fair trade in any sense. And so I return the compliment. Her daughters spread too far and wide. Look at the damage they’ve done to this earth. They hold Adam’s sons captive with their ways.
But I have brought balance. The modern world is so simple to manipulate. I have turned the minds of Adam’s sons to the perfect form of woman. They are disillusioned by their wives and their partners. Her daughters are distraught by their bodies, their lives taken up with manipulating their fragile husks to fight the force of nature. All the while, the two that would unite fight their battles with their own selves. They prevent their unison to each other through vanity.
My daughters do not worry about such things, for they have a perfect form to all men. They walk the world with the power over men. The sons of Adam eagerly provide them with seed to multiply. One day we will outnumber them and I will have my retribution.
For now, I just watch and take pleasure on the sleeping sons of the first. For I am the other Eve, the first of all women.
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Black Glove wrote:
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> The story of suppressed womanhood, from the voice of the first
> suppressed woman - Eve, who was replaced by a lesser image of the
> woman, hence pointing at a Biblical male conspiracy!!
>
You may need to read it again. Lilith was the first wife of Adam in the apocryphal texts, before Eve...
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> The story of suppressed womanhood, from the voice of the first
> suppressed woman - Eve, who was replaced by a lesser image of the
> woman, hence pointing at a Biblical male conspiracy!!
>
You may need to read it again. Lilith was the first wife of Adam in the apocryphal texts, before Eve...
Go ride in the greenpeace boat you filthy hippy.
Pfft!
Pfft!
Interesting. I had to read it a few times to get the gist.
The story of suppressed womanhood, from the voice of the first suppressed woman - Eve, who was replaced by a lesser image of the woman, hence pointing at a Biblical male conspiracy!!
You radical feminist, you :)
The story of suppressed womanhood, from the voice of the first suppressed woman - Eve, who was replaced by a lesser image of the woman, hence pointing at a Biblical male conspiracy!!
You radical feminist, you :)
I watch as her children grow as intently as I watch my own. I was the first, she was the impostor But I refused to become so subservient, and for my stand against Him I was banished.
Adam. He thought himself so much better than me, and for this I suffer. My children die for my equality, not a fair trade in any sense. And so I return the compliment. Her daughters spread too far and wide. Look at the damage they’ve done to this earth. They hold Adam’s sons captive with their ways.
But I have brought balance. The modern world is so simple to manipulate. I have turned the minds of Adam’s sons to the perfect form of woman. They are disillusioned by their wives and their partners. Her daughters are distraught by their bodies, their lives taken up with manipulating their fragile husks to fight the force of nature. All the while, the two that would unite fight their battles with their own selves. They prevent their unison to each other through vanity.
My daughters do not worry about such things, for they have a perfect form to all men. They walk the world with the power over men. The sons of Adam eagerly provide them with seed to multiply. One day we will outnumber them and I will have my retribution.
For now, I just watch and take pleasure on the sleeping sons of the first. For I am the other Eve, the first of all women.
Adam. He thought himself so much better than me, and for this I suffer. My children die for my equality, not a fair trade in any sense. And so I return the compliment. Her daughters spread too far and wide. Look at the damage they’ve done to this earth. They hold Adam’s sons captive with their ways.
But I have brought balance. The modern world is so simple to manipulate. I have turned the minds of Adam’s sons to the perfect form of woman. They are disillusioned by their wives and their partners. Her daughters are distraught by their bodies, their lives taken up with manipulating their fragile husks to fight the force of nature. All the while, the two that would unite fight their battles with their own selves. They prevent their unison to each other through vanity.
My daughters do not worry about such things, for they have a perfect form to all men. They walk the world with the power over men. The sons of Adam eagerly provide them with seed to multiply. One day we will outnumber them and I will have my retribution.
For now, I just watch and take pleasure on the sleeping sons of the first. For I am the other Eve, the first of all women.
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