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Fri 13/05/05 at 23:26
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"SOUP!"
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Subliminally, like it were merely a deluded dream, light filtered through the ominous grate and resonated what little sanity flitted fearfully through the grey. Orbs formed, swelled and imploded on themselves in a beautiful parody of nochalant misanthropy. Gluttonous pride is motive and means for pre-packaged living, an ideal which make my spinal tissue itch furiously.

Art, the sport of madmen who make ganderous pieces of self-contained envy, with faux-subliminal meanings and even more faux yuppies who beleive they perceive a deeper meaning to it. But the real arts aren't forged in some white-lit gallery in Soho, they've carved into the supple fishnet-coated thighs of a scummy tramp named Bernadette or Lucider or Felicity or Charlotte.

The tools of my trade aren't expensive French brushes, tipped with only the finest petrified fox-fur, they are claw hammers and scalpels. Surgical or brutal, sometimes both, I tear and scratch my masterpiece into human canvass. It's never displayed in some echoing public gallery, only in the theatre of skin, as I like to call it. To my select few admirers I am a prodigy, a visionary, a dreamweaver - to my artistic contemparies I am a perverted psychopath, a desecrater of humanity. It matters not.

In the end they all become art. My art. My style. Mine.
Fri 13/05/05 at 23:26
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"SOUP!"
Posts: 13,017
Subliminally, like it were merely a deluded dream, light filtered through the ominous grate and resonated what little sanity flitted fearfully through the grey. Orbs formed, swelled and imploded on themselves in a beautiful parody of nochalant misanthropy. Gluttonous pride is motive and means for pre-packaged living, an ideal which make my spinal tissue itch furiously.

Art, the sport of madmen who make ganderous pieces of self-contained envy, with faux-subliminal meanings and even more faux yuppies who beleive they perceive a deeper meaning to it. But the real arts aren't forged in some white-lit gallery in Soho, they've carved into the supple fishnet-coated thighs of a scummy tramp named Bernadette or Lucider or Felicity or Charlotte.

The tools of my trade aren't expensive French brushes, tipped with only the finest petrified fox-fur, they are claw hammers and scalpels. Surgical or brutal, sometimes both, I tear and scratch my masterpiece into human canvass. It's never displayed in some echoing public gallery, only in the theatre of skin, as I like to call it. To my select few admirers I am a prodigy, a visionary, a dreamweaver - to my artistic contemparies I am a perverted psychopath, a desecrater of humanity. It matters not.

In the end they all become art. My art. My style. Mine.
Fri 13/05/05 at 23:27
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"SOUP!"
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Oh, and by the way, before you ask, I have no idea.

I just wanted to write something.
Fri 13/05/05 at 23:32
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"tokyo police club"
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I quite liked your pragmatic and semantic frameworks (which were evident throughout this ratherpoignant piece), but I can't help but feel that the general public will see these as what they are - a clear rip from much of my earlier works.

Once again, you have completely stolen my style and tried to claim it as your own. I'm flattered yet disappointed - my tutelage has obviously had grave effects upon your self concious - and, after reading any of my works,who wouldn't be paranoid, after all?

I've contacted my lawyers, who are currently on the case. Expected to be served any day soon.
Fri 13/05/05 at 23:36
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"SOUP!"
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Whats tutelage ?
Fri 13/05/05 at 23:40
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"tokyo police club"
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[URL]http://dictionary.reference.com/wordoftheday/archive/2000/11/09.html[/URL]

My work was without fruit, I see.
Fri 13/05/05 at 23:41
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"SOUP!"
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It's a rubbish word.

I'm going to go and listen to The Darkness or whatever it is goths listen to, and probably kill myself.


Bye <3<3<3 xxxx lol.
Sat 14/05/05 at 10:31
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"Laughingstock"
Posts: 3,522
Reminded me of a few things I've posted in the past. Lush words. Overall quite good. Perhaps one more paragraph would have improved it, but conciseness is always welcome on here.
Sat 14/05/05 at 13:13
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Yeah, kinda reminds me of Black Gloves 'human skin painter' story from a while back.

Nice. :)
Sat 14/05/05 at 14:38
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"SOUP!"
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heh thanks.

I truly didn't plan it or even have a coherent or consistant idea in my mind when writing it. Just words and stuff.
Sat 14/05/05 at 20:45
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"gsybe you!"
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Not EVERY sentence needs some slightly over zealous descriptive word.

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