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"I see the fire"

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Mon 11/04/05 at 18:16
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I see the fire- By Luke Poulton

I see the fire in front of my eyes.
Burning,blazing hot.
As the wood burns into crisp in the fire.
We throw in plastic and watch that melt.
As we sit on the grass in the garden I see the fire.
The sparks fly high.
I see the fire and it is hot.
Thu 21/04/05 at 19:47
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How about you try reading some pro-poetry. Learn from that.
Thu 21/04/05 at 19:43
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No I don't think why don't you go back to your cardboard box!
Thu 21/04/05 at 19:41
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Best way that I can see
Thu 21/04/05 at 19:35
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I think not you were suppose to tell me how to improve with my poetry!
Thu 21/04/05 at 17:14
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How to fall over and die in three easy steps.

How to fall over and die, in three easy steps:

Step 1. Raise yourself to a standing position, with plenty of space around you. Breathe deeply, and be assured that what you're about to do is the best thing you're capable of.

Step 2. Now die, ensuring you fall over as you do so. This may take some practice, so try and perfect the dying before attempting the trickier falling over or the combination. When you feel ready, relax, count to three, then just go for it.

Step 3. Repeat steps 2-3.
Thu 21/04/05 at 16:56
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Ok tell me how I can.
Thu 21/04/05 at 16:53
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Yes.
Thu 21/04/05 at 16:51
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Do I need to improve on my poetry then?
Fri 15/04/05 at 20:26
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FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> What? It's good for them.
> I go around primary schools to boost moral.

You mean morale.
Fri 15/04/05 at 14:19
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words!

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