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I see the fire- By Luke Poulton
I see the fire in front of my eyes.
Burning,blazing hot.
As the wood burns into crisp in the fire.
We throw in plastic and watch that melt.
As we sit on the grass in the garden I see the fire.
The sparks fly high.
I see the fire and it is hot.
I see the fire in front of my eyes.
Burning,blazing hot.
As the wood burns into crisp in the fire.
We throw in plastic and watch that melt.
As we sit on the grass in the garden I see the fire.
The sparks fly high.
I see the fire and it is hot.
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So what are the best poetry books?
down wrote:
> And then the five-year-olds point out such atrocious grammar.
>
> "an 'K'?"
>
> Pah.
Ahaha. Poor me.
It's because I had an 'A' to start with. But then I changed it. And I don't even know why. Go team.
> And then the five-year-olds point out such atrocious grammar.
>
> "an 'K'?"
>
> Pah.
Ahaha. Poor me.
It's because I had an 'A' to start with. But then I changed it. And I don't even know why. Go team.
I own a copy in fact. I too find it funny, I just wasn't sure what "unintentionally" was implying.
arctic hobo wrote:
> JFH wrote:
> Search for Benjamin Zephaniah. He's hilarious (unintentionally).
>
> Why do you think that?
Buy a copy of 'Talking Turkeys'. It is the greatest book ever. Anything with poems about chapati trees is good but this has so much other random stuff in that it becomes something special. You will be unable to read the whole book without wetting yourself, guaranteed.
> JFH wrote:
> Search for Benjamin Zephaniah. He's hilarious (unintentionally).
>
> Why do you think that?
Buy a copy of 'Talking Turkeys'. It is the greatest book ever. Anything with poems about chapati trees is good but this has so much other random stuff in that it becomes something special. You will be unable to read the whole book without wetting yourself, guaranteed.
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> No I don't think why don't you go back to your cardoard box!
Now now. I merely offered a constructive suggestion. I do not live in a cardboard box; I do not even own a cardboard box. Calm down, and follow the advice all these nice people are giving you.
> No I don't think why don't you go back to your cardoard box!
Now now. I merely offered a constructive suggestion. I do not live in a cardboard box; I do not even own a cardboard box. Calm down, and follow the advice all these nice people are giving you.
JFH wrote:
> Search for Benjamin Zephaniah. He's hilarious (unintentionally).
Why do you think that?
> Search for Benjamin Zephaniah. He's hilarious (unintentionally).
Why do you think that?
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> I think not you were suppose to tell me how to improve with my poetry!
Study poetry and see why "The fire" is not a "classic"
> I think not you were suppose to tell me how to improve with my poetry!
Study poetry and see why "The fire" is not a "classic"
FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> What? It's good for them.
> I go around primary schools to boost moral.
>
> "What!? You call that an 'K'? *slap* I've seen blind, limbless
> lemurs form better 'K's! Get out of my sight!"
And then the five-year-olds point out such atrocious grammar.
"an 'K'?"
Pah.
> What? It's good for them.
> I go around primary schools to boost moral.
>
> "What!? You call that an 'K'? *slap* I've seen blind, limbless
> lemurs form better 'K's! Get out of my sight!"
And then the five-year-olds point out such atrocious grammar.
"an 'K'?"
Pah.
Search for Benjamin Zephaniah. He's hilarious (unintentionally).
Ok tell me some then please?
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