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Heavenly
As I followed her down the street, tears of sorrow and regret fell from my eyes. I saw her silky blonde hair and longed to feel it between my fingers again. All the remorse welled up inside my soul and I had to turn away, the pain in my heart was eternal and terribly unbearable.
She turned the corner and I struggled to keep up. Even though we were both fourteen everybody knew we had something special, I loved her with all my heart but I knew we could'nt be together because I was not the same. She started humming a tune I knew only too well. Our tune. A song I wrote and poured my heart and soul into. It brought a sad smile to my face.
As she crossed the road I noticed she had a gold bracelet on. I brought her that for her thirteenth birthday. Inscribed were the words, Rebbeca I will always love you. Thinking of it brought an invisible smile to my face .
She came to her house and opened it with her keys I went round the side and looked in at her through the window. She was greeted by her mother with a hug. I could see tears streaming down her beautiful face.
"Why mum?", she wept. "Why did he have to die I love him so much". And with that I faded into the mist and started on my path towards heaven.
As I followed her down the street, tears of sorrow and regret fell from my eyes. I saw her silky blonde hair and longed to feel it between my fingers again. All the remorse welled up inside my soul and I had to turn away, the pain in my heart was eternal and terribly unbearable.
She turned the corner and I struggled to keep up. Even though we were both fourteen everybody knew we had something special, I loved her with all my heart but I knew we could'nt be together because I was not the same. She started humming a tune I knew only too well. Our tune. A song I wrote and poured my heart and soul into. It brought a sad smile to my face.
As she crossed the road I noticed she had a gold bracelet on. I brought her that for her thirteenth birthday. Inscribed were the words, Rebbeca I will always love you. Thinking of it brought an invisible smile to my face .
She came to her house and opened it with her keys I went round the side and looked in at her through the window. She was greeted by her mother with a hug. I could see tears streaming down her beautiful face.
"Why mum?", she wept. "Why did he have to die I love him so much". And with that I faded into the mist and started on my path towards heaven.
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Heavenly
As I followed her down the street, tears of sorrow and regret fell from my eyes. I saw her silky blonde hair and longed to feel it between my fingers again. All the remorse welled up inside my soul and I had to turn away, the pain in my heart was eternal and terribly unbearable.
She turned the corner and I struggled to keep up. Even though we were both fourteen everybody knew we had something special, I loved her with all my heart but I knew we could'nt be together because I was not the same. She started humming a tune I knew only too well. Our tune. A song I wrote and poured my heart and soul into. It brought a sad smile to my face.
As she crossed the road I noticed she had a gold bracelet on. I brought her that for her thirteenth birthday. Inscribed were the words, Rebbeca I will always love you. Thinking of it brought an invisible smile to my face .
She came to her house and opened it with her keys I went round the side and looked in at her through the window. She was greeted by her mother with a hug. I could see tears streaming down her beautiful face.
"Why mum?", she wept. "Why did he have to die I love him so much". And with that I faded into the mist and started on my path towards heaven.
As I followed her down the street, tears of sorrow and regret fell from my eyes. I saw her silky blonde hair and longed to feel it between my fingers again. All the remorse welled up inside my soul and I had to turn away, the pain in my heart was eternal and terribly unbearable.
She turned the corner and I struggled to keep up. Even though we were both fourteen everybody knew we had something special, I loved her with all my heart but I knew we could'nt be together because I was not the same. She started humming a tune I knew only too well. Our tune. A song I wrote and poured my heart and soul into. It brought a sad smile to my face.
As she crossed the road I noticed she had a gold bracelet on. I brought her that for her thirteenth birthday. Inscribed were the words, Rebbeca I will always love you. Thinking of it brought an invisible smile to my face .
She came to her house and opened it with her keys I went round the side and looked in at her through the window. She was greeted by her mother with a hug. I could see tears streaming down her beautiful face.
"Why mum?", she wept. "Why did he have to die I love him so much". And with that I faded into the mist and started on my path towards heaven.
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