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thinkin of writing a adult book called altevo pablo.it's about a horse.
july 1st.2001
Someone came to see me in the field today she was a strange girl she kept trying to catch me...i was always just out of her reach she called me a loony and that she would "never buy a horse with such a bad habit" i haven't got bad habits...well i think i haven't...hmmmmm...anyway as she was leaving i bit her bum she really pised me off.
july 2nd.2001
Sally came today and put a sign over the gate it looked like elas rof esroh.i asked matty wat it said and he said it said horse for sale.poor old matty i'm gonna miss him sooooooo much.
july 3rd.2001
Sally came and saddled me up this afternoon she started crying on the outride and said "i don't want this to be the last outride i have on you".why is it the last outride she'll have on me are we going to a show or something.
july 4th.2001
Another girl came today she was a lot nicer then the other one though she brought da da da daaaaaaaaaaa POLOS she was a lovely girl.she road me round the ring so gently it was wonderful.and when she took my tack off she took the bridle off first!!! AND she said she would buy me if i didn't weave in the stable.
july 5th.2001
that girl came back today with a horse box.she loaded me up and took me to this yard there's horses everywere she has just turned me out into the paddock and guess what theres loads of horses in the next door paddock i run up to meet them i stand at the gate asking myself "why aren't they coming over"suddenly one of the horses see me and walks over from what i can see he's an old grey shetland pony he hasn't got a bit of paso fino in him i am thinking of turning away but one of the other horses shouts "yo mate hows the grass out there"i reply "very nice thank you hows your's" he replys "the grass in this field is shiit mate you've got the best grass and paddock because your new.were have you come from you loser" before i can reply the little shetland says "just ignore him he thinks he's better then everyone else because he's a retired racehorse.what breed are you" i reply "my mum was a paso fino and my dad was a arab" the shetland and i had a good natter to each other i found out his name is mingo he didn't even laugh when i told him my name was altevo pablo nice guy.
what do you think.:)
july 1st.2001
Someone came to see me in the field today she was a strange girl she kept trying to catch me...i was always just out of her reach she called me a loony and that she would "never buy a horse with such a bad habit" i haven't got bad habits...well i think i haven't...hmmmmm...anyway as she was leaving i bit her bum she really pised me off.
july 2nd.2001
Sally came today and put a sign over the gate it looked like elas rof esroh.i asked matty wat it said and he said it said horse for sale.poor old matty i'm gonna miss him sooooooo much.
july 3rd.2001
Sally came and saddled me up this afternoon she started crying on the outride and said "i don't want this to be the last outride i have on you".why is it the last outride she'll have on me are we going to a show or something.
july 4th.2001
Another girl came today she was a lot nicer then the other one though she brought da da da daaaaaaaaaaa POLOS she was a lovely girl.she road me round the ring so gently it was wonderful.and when she took my tack off she took the bridle off first!!! AND she said she would buy me if i didn't weave in the stable.
july 5th.2001
that girl came back today with a horse box.she loaded me up and took me to this yard there's horses everywere she has just turned me out into the paddock and guess what theres loads of horses in the next door paddock i run up to meet them i stand at the gate asking myself "why aren't they coming over"suddenly one of the horses see me and walks over from what i can see he's an old grey shetland pony he hasn't got a bit of paso fino in him i am thinking of turning away but one of the other horses shouts "yo mate hows the grass out there"i reply "very nice thank you hows your's" he replys "the grass in this field is shiit mate you've got the best grass and paddock because your new.were have you come from you loser" before i can reply the little shetland says "just ignore him he thinks he's better then everyone else because he's a retired racehorse.what breed are you" i reply "my mum was a paso fino and my dad was a arab" the shetland and i had a good natter to each other i found out his name is mingo he didn't even laugh when i told him my name was altevo pablo nice guy.
what do you think.:)
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tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> £10=£10.00
> £10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
> £100000=£100.000
> £1000000=£10000.000
>
>
> there happy now
yeah mate you're mixing up POINTS with COMMAS
ten thousand pounds = £10,000
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> £10=£10.00
> £10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
> £100000=£100.000
> £1000000=£10000.000
>
>
> there happy now
yeah mate you're mixing up POINTS with COMMAS
ten thousand pounds = £10,000
tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
IRONY!
> £10=£10.00
*tick*
> £10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
*Cross*
> £100000=£100.000
*Cross*
> £1000000=£10000.000
*Cross*
>
>
> there happy now
Nope - 1 out of 4
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
IRONY!
> £10=£10.00
*tick*
> £10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
*Cross*
> £100000=£100.000
*Cross*
> £1000000=£10000.000
*Cross*
>
>
> there happy now
Nope - 1 out of 4
tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> £10=£10.00
> £10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
> £100000=£100.000
> £1000000=£10000.000
>
>
> there happy now
Ha.
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> £10=£10.00
> £10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
> £100000=£100.000
> £1000000=£10000.000
>
>
> there happy now
Ha.
tiptopb###h wrote:
> no i'm am 16teen you wanna die
yeah but not right now. you 16teen are you will i am 16.
> no i'm am 16teen you wanna die
yeah but not right now. you 16teen are you will i am 16.
god i think you lot need to go back to school
£10=£10.00
£10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
£100000=£100.000
£1000000=£10000.000
there happy now
£10=£10.00
£10000=£10.000 ten thousand pounds
£100000=£100.000
£1000000=£10000.000
there happy now
tiptopb###h wrote:
> yeah i can actully can you spell yours. i can spell my pets too
>
> roxie (my dog)
> velmer (my dog)
> johnny (my hamster)
> tikky (my home bred guinea pig)
> maggie (tikkys mum)
> charlie (my chinchilla)
> kit kat (my driving horse)
> chunky (my driving horse)
> midnight storm (my riding and dressage horse)
Why did you justify that with an answer? SHows you had to think.
> yeah i can actully can you spell yours. i can spell my pets too
>
> roxie (my dog)
> velmer (my dog)
> johnny (my hamster)
> tikky (my home bred guinea pig)
> maggie (tikkys mum)
> charlie (my chinchilla)
> kit kat (my driving horse)
> chunky (my driving horse)
> midnight storm (my riding and dressage horse)
Why did you justify that with an answer? SHows you had to think.
tiptopb###h wrote:
> i don't think that would be a good idea shooting my boyfriends
> £10.000 horse! would it
A £10 horse, last I saw of those rates was the summer of '97 when Mrs Tribbers was in town.
> i don't think that would be a good idea shooting my boyfriends
> £10.000 horse! would it
A £10 horse, last I saw of those rates was the summer of '97 when Mrs Tribbers was in town.
£500... it might be because it's the size of a shetland pony,it's not backed or trained,it's got so many vices(bad habits)the owners think they won't sell it or it's a foal.
£10,000... it's a good showjumper,it's won a lot of money,it's a pedigree,it does very high dressage level,it has won a lot in showing.
£1.. it's a wild new forst pony or a wild highland pony
£10,000... it's a good showjumper,it's won a lot of money,it's a pedigree,it does very high dressage level,it has won a lot in showing.
£1.. it's a wild new forst pony or a wild highland pony
A £10.000 horse comes from a toy shop or is real but has no legs.
What's the difference between a £500 and a £10.000 horse then?
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